Misc Attempt My first Clean? Any good? HELP!

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Hi all, I have just started to clean manga. And after a few practises this is my first one,
From this

http://img259.imageshack.us/i/naruto46901.jpg/

To this

http://img259.imageshack.us/i/ednaruto46901.jpg/

What do you think?

And The grey on Bee, i just can seem to make it look any nicer? Any ideas?
I Dont mind being a Cleaner!

Sorry for not directly showing you the image. The reason is, its too HQ and too BIG

 

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Change the width to 1300px
Change it to grayscale
Read some tutorial at http://senbonzakura.kageyoshi.net/