Wow, that's really great!
Can't believe noone's responded before me, but yay! That's really great! Keep it up!
It's great for me, and everyone else that likes to color pictures with people like you
Ok like already said. There is no point in erasing all the stuff on nothes on the board same counts for the details on the wall they just belong there...also why didnt you redraw the lines of the pips of kakashis bed ?
But for a first attempt its okay still a few things to improve but I guess your second cleaned image will be much better