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Nice!

296: the background looks really good. But did you forget some part of his arm? :o Some of this is colored in black and some in grey. That looks a bit confusing.
Plus, shading on the skin would be nice.

Other than that - it's quite decent. :)
(More shading could be the trick to make it look better though. Sry, I'm only honest and hope that my hints will help you to improve the pic.)
 

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one word - smuge tool , try to smuge your shading togheter....
 

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more shading is needed. Also, what's with the white rectangle for the Naruto logo? The cloth for 296 is strange too. Jiraiya's hair is a bit too light.
 

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i dont know about the arm, when i uploaded it into deviant it just looked like that, but in my pc it looks fine
and thanks for the comments i just started coloring mangas a week ago and im still finding ways on how to use fireworks properly
 
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