Nagato 448 page 12

[blaarg8891]

Hello all! This is a new line art by yours truly of Nagato from chapter 448 page 12, now if you have not read the chapter yet I do not suggest looking at the link.
Its a big picture so I wont directly link the picture here. Anyone is allowed to color it just please give me credit. Hopefully I will get my color up sometime this weekend, but I might not find the time. Much like my last line art >.>

http://blaarg8891.deviantart.com/art/Nagato-448-123332711


All critiques are welcome!

 

[lee-nus]

its ok, the worst parts are the little details. the rounds are not round for instance. might be a minor, but detracts from the image as a whole. i would also advice you to try and make your lines a little more dynamic! keep it up though!

 

[- aMt -]

cool, thanks for it ^^