Nami, The Bride (chapter 471 page 11)

[Mugiwara_no_Jack]

So people.
It's been a while but here's my newest One Piece coloration

Have fun and feel free to comment.

(btw.: I know the flash looks kind of weird but that was somehow the best I could make ^^;

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[Organizized]

Hey, good to see you coloring again! Looking good too, and the lightning bolt looks absolutely okay to me. Hope to see more soon!

 

[cheer1o]

maybe, for the lightning I would suggest you to use more "lights" [no pun intended XD]
expecially the white colour in a way that contrasts more the yellow

anyway, it's nice!!!

 

[Absolutio]

I agree with cheer1o about the lightning.
Also, I would suggest you to remove the black lines from the colorings and replace them with a very dark shade of another color, pink or pinkish-blue would've been my choice.. It's just too blunt in this coloring..
Anyways, very nice... I would like to see an improved version of it..

 

[Mugiwara_no_Jack]

Yeah I am not fully satisfied with the outcome

I'm overdoing this after my current work