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[Hand Banana]

Always wanted to do a lineart for this page. had the time so I done it. Also I tried using less thick lines as I been told in the past my lines tend to be too thick. So feel free to critique please.

http://wickedbleh.deviantart.com/art/My-Eyes-133021630

 

[nat]

Cool lineart! very clean and precise, thanks HB!

 

[toni783]

great line thanks for sharing XD

 

[Black Lagoon]

same as nat and toni783, great line

 

[- aMt -]

Great lineart =D

 

[Weapon_X]

Fantastic lineart.

 

[pineappleherb]

this lineart makes it clear why i hate lineart

dude, look at his nose too

LAZY

no offense, but it is what it is

 

[-Ren Boy-]

Coming from the guy who barely gives anything and trolls through minority of these threads to give bad critic pfttt

The linart is cool, you have only been doing it for like a month right? You will get there soon

 

[pineappleherb]

Coming from the guy who barely gives anything and trolls through minority of these threads to give bad critic pfttt

heres what i drew the other day, criticize me

oh wait it isn't a naruto coloring so maybe thats why i don't post it in here

 

[-Ren Boy-]

O yes your a great real life artist, I wonder how your artist skills will go when on the computer. And if you don't post any naruto stuff...who are you to judge badly like that, if you don't post any Naruto colourings/Linarts etc. Stop going to every other thread and troll peoples works, it is not a good look.

No more on this topic because 1.It is off topic and 2.I'm not getting into trouble because one guy can't keep his destructive opinions to himself

 

[pineappleherb]

lol the point of the thread is lineart. if there is one thing that computers CANT do as well as a pencil, it's lineart

im sorry that my opinions aren't quite so high as everyone elses, but how is he supposed to get any better when NO ONE tells him whats wrong with it? "great" "fantastic" "good work dude" give me a break


i dont see roger ebert directing movies, but he sure criticizes them an awful lot

 

[-Ren Boy-]

It is also funny on that thread where that army picture is, you said "please don't go harsh" with the signitures you did. But there you go condradicting youself by trying to slaughter someones work.

If you want to give a good opinion, do it constructivly.

Robert Ebert, is a critic of movies, not pictures it is a whole different thing. He does it for a living so he must make lies up just to get public in... He justifies himself very well on why he hates a movie. You just complain on one minor error and you don't even explain to the guy what missing these lines can do, remember we are humans, we make mistakes.

Enough said.

 

[pineappleherb]

It is also funny on that thread where that army picture is, you said "please don't go harsh"

i actually said "i suck at these so be gentle," lol if you're gonna quote me no need to lie

aaaaanyway im not slaughtering his work, he did a lazy job so i'm going to call it a lazy job. i'm OH SO sorry that one person on the mighty and endless internet doesn't think his 20 minute lineart is very good

comparing a single image where there can be (and are) LOTS of mistakes that aren't faithful to the original picture that he's TRACING, and comparing a movie where there are thousands of factors that play into the quality of the film such as dialogue, themes, sounds, actors, etc ETC,


just doesn't make a whole lot of sense


it isnt like i bash every single work i see, here check this out

http://mangahelpers.com/forums/showpost.php?p=1455400&postcount=4

 

[-Ren Boy-]

Oh and you was being gentle ok then...SURE....(Y) great. Hypocrite.

And I said you bash minority even though you have nothing on your name....oh those two pieces of naruto art. Pffttt greatttt.

I will forget this ever happened.

P.s hand bannana your getting there, soon come

 

[pineappleherb]

i have no idea what you're even talking about, what MINORITY am i bashing, exactly? so instead of continuing

let me break this down

1. he did a scrappy job, it's by no means BAD, but i'm not going to lie to him and tell him its the best i've ever seen, because it ISNT

2. no i do not need a degree to be able to tell when someones lineart doesn't look good. for christs sake all he's doing in the first place is TRACING, he barely deserves any credit for that

3. i know, im the big bad wolf that actually criticizes people's work instead of glorifying them. obviously i like a lot of stuff that comes out of people here, and when it's good i tell them

4. but when someone can't even finish the eyes (THE MOST IMPORTANT PART OF THE FUCKING PIECE) i'm going to tell him it doesnt look very good

case closed

 

[Hand Banana]

i have no idea what you're even talking about, what MINORITY am i bashing, exactly? so instead of continuing

let me break this down

1. he did a scrappy job, it's by no means BAD, but i'm not going to lie to him and tell him its the best i've ever seen, because it ISNT

2. no i do not need a degree to be able to tell when someones lineart doesn't look good. for christs sake all he's doing in the first place is TRACING, he barely deserves any credit for that

3. i know, im the big bad wolf that actually criticizes people's work instead of glorifying them. obviously i like a lot of stuff that comes out of people here, and when it's good i tell them

4. but when someone can't even finish the eyes (THE MOST IMPORTANT PART OF THE FUCKING PIECE) i'm going to tell him it doesnt look very good

case closed

Meh I don't mind the criticism. Its either bad or good. But only part I trace is from the sketch pad of mine. The details in the eyes I don't go full out exactly is because most people who color them skip out on it and add their own details. The nose is something i had to settle with because I just couldn't get it close enough. But thanks all for the feedback. Critism is used to better one's self.

 

[pineappleherb]

nothing personal against you of course, i understand where you're coming from

 

[Hand Banana]

You can find the colored version here.
http://wickedbleh.deviantart.com/art/My-Eyes-133021630

 

[Googlez_kun]

i have to say that i totally agree with pineapplehearb!!
i like the way he writes his comments,because they are always honest and actually aren't spam and rather help the artists and show them their mistakes!!
and he does say good things(look at my threads)!
if he wouldn't have mentioned it now,Hand Banana would've kept being lazy or something like that and other users also should know now that working a bit longer on a piece makes it better!!
and to you Hand Banana i have nothng to add,i'd stick to pineapplehearbs opinion^^

 

[Hand Banana]

I admire all peoples opinion Google. But as I said I didn't do the eyes in detail because people usually ignore it and add their own details. Look at the link to the colored version. She used some of her own stuff and it came out great. It wouldn't have took me but of a few seconds to add some scratches to the eyes. The nose again I simply couldn't do exactly so I did something else. But if you say your feedback is the same as his I appreciate it. I have no hard feelings when it comes to criticism.