Naruto and Killerbee vs. Pain

[Erian]

I finally finished it,yay^^. I have to say that I am a bit proud of myself, because it is my first real attempt in drawing an fanart for Naruto.
I gave my best. Hope you like it.

Version 1(Just Pain and Killerbee)

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Version 2(Naruto,Killerbee and Pain)

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I need a little help with this:
Version 3(Color Work in Progress)

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I don´t get that rasengan right. I don´t know why but it don´t look as it should. Can someone give me an little advice for this?

 

[thewar]

i like the idea

 

[Erian]

Thank you^^.

 

[ziaja]

ide is good but , art is ugly

 

[- aMt -]

good idea

nice lines ..

 

[Giilshark]

nice drawing! but the line is very big..

 

[Erian]

Thank you very much^^