naruto and omoi

[ernie1991]

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http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/3883/naruto4530203linekkkks.jpg


i upload a new version of this pic so how do you find it?

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http://img7.imageshack.us/i/naruto4530203linekkkks.jpg/

 

[- aMt -]

is a great job, congratulations..

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just dont like the light efects on rasengan and on naruto. but is
still so great

 

[ernie1991]

is a great job, congratulations..

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just dont like the light efects on rasengan and on naruto. but is
still so great

thx aMT, yeah the light effect i don't like, too but i didn't know how i can make it better

 

[- aMt -]

@ernie1991
see this. Not much better than yours, but you can help.

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[ernie1991]

ahh this could be help, maybe i make the same again with other light, thank you

 

[Googlez_kun]

well,well,well...
first of all omoi looks really good,though you sometimes forget some details like that the head also throws a shadow or other things,but he looks very good nevertheless

anyway
moving on to naruto i have to say something about the rasenshuriken first
the idea behind it is nice,but i think it would also work without this little effect on the edges of the RS
now to naruto himself
i think that the basic shading is nice,but the rasenganreflection isn't that well done and i think the example amt showed you is pretty nice and i think it should help you!
overall a solid and good job,though there is no background
keep it up man!!

 

[ernie1991]

thx, i upload a new version

 

[Googlez_kun]

definatly better now!!!
great job!!!

 

[nat]

I definitely like V2 Ernie, the background fits much more smoothly with the characters and their jutsu.
It also brings out the shading and makes it look clean whereas the first highlights some of the messy spots.
I love that you took criticism and improved the colors greatly.

 

[Jaime F.]

Nice Ernie, I like both of them. I think the 1 with the blue background looks a little nicer, but I like the way other 1 looks a lot to. Well anyways, I think this is my 1st time saving 1 of your colorings, so in my opinion, you're definitely improving.

 

[ernie1991]

thx for the comments^^