Naruto Chapter 187 lineart

[Hand Banana]

Here is another chapter i did the lineart for will color as soon as the other project is done.

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[PhoenixRoy]

The Nejis' lines look great, but I think you should have included the background. I could understand not re-drawing the lines for the village, but the curtains could have been better.

It great overall, tough. I do like your lines.

 

[pineappleherb]

your's is clean i guess, but every lineart i ever see lacks the definition of the original art

like look at his ear on the original. the thickness and variation on the lines are what make it look good; and look at his left eye, your's is all wobbly and whatnot

i honestly cannot understand using someone's traced lines over the original art, especially when the original art is scanned at such a high quality

you put in the effort to make it look clean, but i just dont think it's worth it at all

no offense

 

[Hand Banana]

The Nejis' lines look great, but I think you should have included the background. I could understand not re-drawing the lines for the village, but the curtains could have been better.

It great overall, tough. I do like your lines.

I didn't include the background because Imma do my own for the coloring. Sorta a Tokyo background with bright lights.

your's is clean i guess, but every lineart i ever see lacks the definition of the original art

like look at his ear on the original. the thickness and variation on the lines are what make it look good; and look at his left eye, your's is all wobbly and whatnot

i honestly cannot understand using someone's traced lines over the original art, especially when the original art is scanned at such a high quality

you put in the effort to make it look clean, but i just dont think it's worth it at all

no offense

None ever taken. But as I told you before a lot of the definition of my linearts will be added doing the coloring phase. I don't like using the pressure tool much. And yes I know what the purpose of the tablet. I simply prefer my lines to be thinner. If I wanted to I could have carefully use the thickness that was used. But i don't. I guess it depends on the person doing it. But thanks for the feedback.

And a lot of people use my linearts. Here I'll show you an example.

Before

After

I think her version come out fine using my lines. Minor little snippets but overall it was done well.

 

[pineappleherb]

I think her version come out fine using my lines.

this is true

 

[Aldoor]

I like your lines, I almost used them (I talk about all your lines) myself. However, I didn't want to "destroy" them with my coloring (which isn't so good), and I really need a muse to color....

 

[PhoenixRoy]

I also prefer the thin lines. I think it gives more of the anime feel. I'll probably color this in the future.

 

[- aMt -]

i sso good for "soft painters". but for Ceel shading, dont is so good xD