Naruto kyuubi sage

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a little flat, no? i'd give it a more interesting background (lets face it, bright grey isnt really pop art, is it :) ), and it would be well off with some more contrast!
 

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a little flat, no? i'd give it a more interesting background (lets face it, bright grey isnt really pop art, is it :) ), and it would be well off with some more contrast!
Yeah backgrounds are the bane of my existence, I never know what to do when I cant just put some clouds in the back lol. I am kind of an art noob so could you elaborate the contrast thing?
 

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i would suggest- switch the shading from the side of his face, to his entire face (have his face dark instead of the side of his face)

maybe try some different colors, throw a gradient on it, spruce it up, get creative

on the good side, i think the way you colored his eyes are the best i've seen yet for the kyuubi/sage mode/whatev
 

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i would suggest- switch the shading from the side of his face, to his entire face (have his face dark instead of the side of his face)

maybe try some different colors, throw a gradient on it, spruce it up, get creative

on the good side, i think the way you colored his eyes are the best i've seen yet for the kyuubi/sage mode/whatev
Thanks I will try that, and thank you about the eyes :D
 

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Yeah backgrounds are the bane of my existence, I never know what to do when I cant just put some clouds in the back lol. I am kind of an art noob so could you elaborate the contrast thing?
lol, it comes with pracice though. try using interesting patterns and textures if you cant paint one yourself. anything is better than flat colors! :)

well, for starters, the palette you used is kinda "muddy", try picking clear and more lively colors, without going too wild with saturation. we're looking for harmony, yeah? next thing is to set the contrast according to the lighting. the stronger the light, the higher the contrast, kind of. you can make dramatic and good-looking effects with a little contrast. well, it all depends, if its really dark overall, there wont be much contrast, but that can look good too, if its in harmony with the rest.

so... play around a bit more, add some details, like a little glare in the eye or so. makes it more lively!

and give me a shout if anything needs clarifying...!
 

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Thanks! I will try to utilize that in my next color.
 

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I like the orange glow of Naruto's Kyuubi/Sage Mode eye's a lot, good job. Of course for the most part, I agree with what Lee-nus says, so you still have quite a few things to work on. Just keep on practicing, and always try to step it up to make improvements. You're bound to make mistakes either way, but it's important to try to learn from those mistakes.
 
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cool
 

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not bad dude!!:D
 

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I agree with Lee. You need to work more on details, especially the backgroud.
 
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