Naruto - My second Work

sir_arles

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Well, now that i had some advices from mi first work, i tried to improve in the style that everyone suggested in my second one.

Here is the result:

Hope you like it, and if anyone wants an HQ version, just ask for it and I'll upload it ;)

Please leave comments and advices to continue to make my own and super style :D

Jajaja, just kidding ^^

Seriously, please drop some critics so I can correct my mistakes, OK?

See ya

Nos vemos
 

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great work man, i really like it, u have talent :)
 

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Thanks, really ^__^

I was thinking that maybe the face has few shadows, and maybe there had to be more added in that area... What do you think?

Oh, the light comes from Above Naruto, to his right.

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cool hermano :)
 

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maybe u should add some shade under mouth to see that he have a chin :)
 

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Yup, that's right ^^


Thanks a lot!

Later I'll post the "remaked" version =D

See ya

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Q gusto de verte por aca!, ya vi el tuyo en Mcanime y me parecio bueno, aunq creo que nesecitas usar colores menos chillones!, me gusto como lo pintaste pero no los colores, como por ejemplo el del pelo me parece un amarillo muy fuerte, bueno espero que lo corrijas de resto esta excelente viejo, sigue asi, para ver si me enseñas algunas cosas, Saludos! Great job :D

Pd 3 stars
 

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grate, pal! i like it, if this is your second work, you did an awsome work!
 
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