Naruto NG (Next Generation)

[Lyra Belaqua]

erm, lol... maybe fri or saturday XD

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooo............. I'll die if I won't read Chapter 2 soon................

 

[Raine_Joybringer]

Re: Spoiler/Teaser Pictures

*obeys and drools* Ooh, is that a scythe-weilding ninja in that second page? Coool...

 

[Fuzzy]

Re: Spoiler/Teaser Pictures

it sure is , makes you want chapter 2 right NOW don't it lol

 

[Fuzzy]

you can hold in there just a bit longer, and when chapter 2 is out you can read it over and over and drool over each page

 

[Adam_xx]

O_O
Dammit Fuzzy!
Lucky!...

 

[Fuzzy]

hate me if you must, for i shall still get pages early XDD

 

[Adam_xx]

Hates too strong...

And envy you I shall...
For I have no power in stoping the pages from getting to you early... xP

 

[Galth]

but yeah, typesetters are a good addition ^^
erm, khal yeah u are pretty good at typesetting ;D

1 + 1 = 2
Need help?

 

[Dynamic Dragon]

lol, erm, ill c in chapter 3 ^^

 

[alice2001]

I don't know if it is under discussion, but... First things first: I really enjoyed reading Naruto NG - about the drawing style good job ! However, I was impressed about the left to right reading instead of the traditional right to left... Well, don't know if it is just me or other ppl as well mentioned about it (didn't read the entire Topic, my bad). Still, there is a page (pg 05) that the conversation is done through the system "right to left".

 

[Dynamic Dragon]

there is oO

 

[Galth]

Not a page, but a panel... well, you read the top balloon first, the rest of the page is normal...

 

[Predator]

But still ...... Dhazard has his point, DD.

You might consider making your chapters according to the manga system, instead of comics style. That way many readers would be less confused. Personally, I always start reading the manga style and if I see somethings wrong, only then I check if it's not made by comics system.

 

[Dynamic Dragon]

tbh, i dont see the point in it being eastern version cos of the only reason:

- its english...

if u wanna read it eastern style, then simply flip it horizontally lol

 

[Galth]

Yeah, most people are used to the eastern style because of manga, but as this is originally english, and you will probably show it to non-mangafans too, keep it this way

 

[alice2001]

tbh, i dont see the point in it being eastern version cos of the only reason:

- its english...

if u wanna read it eastern style, then simply flip it horizontally lol

Don't mind at all (I did change the panels of place and that is why I noticed that first panel being left to right - even the person who drew this one did it unaware of it... seems it comes naturally when drawing in manga style hehehe). I want to make clear that is because we are already used to the eastern style, not because I dislike or wouldn't accept the comic's way since it does not matter in the end.

Yeah, most people are used to the eastern style because of manga, but as this is originally english, and you will probably show it to non-mangafans too, keep it this way

That is it. Because we are used to and this is the only point I have

 

[ViseStompy]

Amazing artwork and amazing charachter designs! I admit I am rather curious though if you have plans of introducing their sensei anytime soon.=D Keep up the great work.

 

[Dynamic Dragon]

lol, sorry but he's not showing up till near the end lol X_D

 

[Adam_xx]

Omg, the suspense is killing me..
How much longer DD... @_@

 

[Galth]

lol, sorry but he's not showing up till near the end lol X_D

dont give away those things, dd XD XD XD

just answer questions like that with a "maybe"

here i'll help you train with it:

are there going to be any character deaths?