Naruto NG (Next Generation)

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Re: Naruto NG Chapter 04 (Version 2)

i like NG more and more with every chapter thx u guys good work :smile-big
 

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Re: Naruto NG Chapter 02

thanks thanks thanks . . .^^
 

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Re: Naruto NG Chapter 03 (version 2)

ossp!!! only can say thanks u a lot^^
 

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Re: Naruto NG Chapter 04 (Version 2)

great!!! only can say thank u a lot
 

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Re: Naruto NG Chapter 04 (Version 2)

nice job it was freaking awesome man
 

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Re: do u like naruto ng?

i think it has great style
the storyline will eventually grow
 

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Re: do u like naruto ng?

i just read it and i like it, its really cool. can't wait to see more chpts.
 

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one. i like it, u got talented.
two. i'm thinkin bout creatin a manga myself (its jus ppl cant commint)
three. wanna partner up? i tend 2 be better at da story than da drawing but i draw 2.
four. jus email me
 

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Re: Naruto NG Chapter 02

Dude the whole idea of Naruto NG was a good one. This should have replaced the fillers. That would have been cooler.
 

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Re: Naruto NG Chapter 04 (Version 2)

wonderful. thx a lot DD
 

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Re: do u like naruto ng?

I love it, I just wished that the chapters didn't take so long to make. But of course I know they want to get it right so, I can wait. I just wish it didn't take so long. Other than waiting for new chapters to come out, the whole idea of Naruto NG is great.
 

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Re: do u like naruto ng?

Rated RKO said:
I love it, I just wished that the chapters didn't take so long to make. But of course I know they want to get it right so, I can wait. I just wish it didn't take so long. Other than waiting for new chapters to come out, the whole idea of Naruto NG is great.
Getting it right isn't what takes so long, its Dynamic Dragon finding free time to draw the chapters, he's busy with school and other things in his life right now :p
 

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Re: Character Contest!!

Now I wish I could draw as good. I know I probably won't make the final cut, but I'll give it a try.
 

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Re: do u like naruto ng?

"like it" =)))))
Thanks!!!
 

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Re: Character Contest!!

It's not about who draws best, it's about who's character has the most interesting inner design. The way of being, the background story, abilities, such things IMHO matter more than how does he/she is drawn like. The author of the manga is going to draw the character is his own way anyway, so don't worry and believe in yourself. Okay? ^_^ [br]Posted on: January 19, 2007, 04:54:30 PM_________________________________________________And here's a complete description of my char ^_^

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/47085795/
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/47085898/
Given name: Taka
Family name: Uteka (but uses his mother's former last name: Inochi)
Village: Konoha Gakure (originally Kumo Gakure)
Rank: Chunin
Age: 18
Birthday: May 25 (Gemini)
Bloodtype: A
Chakra Nature: Lighting (but for most of time uses bare genjutsu)
Taijutsu: 3/5
Ninjutsu: 2/5
Genjutsu: 5/5
Height: 180 cm
Weight: 55 kg
Eye color: light brown (like Tsunade)
Hair color: lemon blond (shoulder long, braided)
Short description: tall, thin, looks quite weak, kawaii
Character: plain, simple, easy going, takes everything lightly, no real ambitions, optimist, friendly, lazy, kind
Hobby: playing violin, watching theater shows, chemistry experiments

History:

Taka was born in Kumo Gakure. His mother Oki Inochi has come to the village shortly before, begging for

permision to stay. One respected nobleman took her in. Later on they got married. The nobleman accepted her

son as his own, giving him equal rights as other clan members.

Taka had no idea the nobleman, named Akira Uteka, wasn't his natural father. He grew up in firendly

atmosphere, living the life of a local baka and clumsy idiot, who's only talent was genjutsu. He didn't care for

his bad reeputation, for his family loved him and accepted the way he was. Accept for his genius younger

halfbrother Atasuke, who openly called a Taka looser and the black sheep of the Uteka.

He failed the chuunin exam in his village twice. Once for cheating during the test, and once for using

unallowed special medicine he made on his own to increase his stamina.

When Taka was 13 and Atasuke 11, their mother died. Before she did, she told Taka that his natural father was

Sakiro Dai, the leader of a terrorist organisation, well known and feared in the Lighting Country.

Unfortunatelly, Atasuke intercepted the talk. Mad, for Taka was the heir of the clan, although he wasn't of

Uteka's blood, he decided to take action. He framed Taka into stealing a scroll, in which a powerful demon was

sealed (He told Taka, that if he could steal the scroll and show it to a hermit that lived outside the village, the

hermit would bring their mother back to life. Taka loved his mother so much, that he went for it). Then,

Atasuke convinced everybody, that Taka was going to steal the scroll for his natural father, the great bandit

Sakiro Dai. Taka was caught and accussed for betrayal. He made it to escape, swearing revenge to his brother.

Having lived two years as a nukenin, Taka was caught by the Konoha ANBU squad. The Third Hokage

however believed Taka's story and decided to let him stay in the village under the name of Taka Inochi. He

could appreciate Taka's genius for genjutsu nobody have acknowledged before and gave the boy an opportunity

to develop. At age of 16, Taka became a chunin.

Safe from Kumo Gakure's oinins, Taka is living a happy life as Konoha's genjutsu expert. He's doing

everything just to live a normal life. He doesn't really want to go back and challenge Atasuke, for he still loves

him deep in heart, but he can't forgive him. His only goal is to be free and happy.

Jutsus:

1- (Mira no Jutsu)
Genjutsu. Requires eye contact with the opponent. After the jutsu is used, the opponent is seeing everything

through Taka's eyes (for example: If the oponent is stnading in front of Taka, he sees the same what Taka does,

menaing himself, as if it was a reflection). While the opponent is confused, Taka can come near and attack.

2- (Shoken Enkei)
Genjutsu. The attacked person cannot measure the distance properly (for ex.: a butterfly appears to be bigger

than an elephant anf things in the background appear to be in the foreground). A lot of chakra gets used.

3- (Ari Odori)
Genjutsu. The opponent begins to feel itchy. He thinks a lot of ants is walking over his body.

4- (Kiwa no Jutsu)
Genjutsu. THe opponent thinks, he is standing on the edge of a f.ex. Grand canyon. Lots of chakra gets used.

5- (Raikou Furaito)
Genjutsu. The opponent thinks a lot of birds is flying a thim and scratch him ot death.

6- (Shoken Naiteki)
Genjutsu. The attacked opponent sees the inner organs instead of the skin on the outside (as if through rentgen)

of all living objetcs around, even himself. Lots of chakra.

7- (Shoken Magarime)
Genjutsu. The opponent sees everyhting upside down.

8- The Spiral Circle (Rasenmaru)
Taka's most effective jutsu saved for special ocasions. He creates a spiral of chakra in his right hand (it's not

like rasengan, which is 3D, rasenmaru is flat), and then fills it with Lighting chakra, creating a whirl of

electricity (The trademark jutsu of the Uteka clan. Being an outsider Uteka, Taka needed long time to learn it:

started at age of 7, accomplished at age of 17. In comparision, his halfbrother needed one year only.).

Apart form that Taka is in charge of a white falcon Bomber, who drops poo on his opponents during the fights.

About Bomber

Name: Bomber
Nickname: Bombby
Species: Snow Falcon
Color: White
Age: 10 (middle of his life)
Character: Mean (but not for Taka)
Favorite food: Roasted mice (he brings mice to Taka and Taka grills them)
Hobby: Dropping poo on people
Relations with his owner: They're best pals
History: One day Taka found an egg in the forest. Having found no nest, from which it could have fallen, he

took the egg in. He was the first person the young bird saw after hatching. Taka took good care of his bird. He

read sotries to him, sung, taught to fly (dressed himself as a bird and jumped on a trampoline moving his arms,

making an idiot out of himself), hunting, aso. Learning his bird is a male, he named him Bomber (figure out

why ^_^). Actually, Bombby is Taka's closest firend and companion. He supports his owner during fights,

brings him mice and sleeps on his shoulder.
 

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Re: Character Contest!!

Hmm,this might just be an interesting thing to join in on. So far the manga seems good and it would be awesome to see a character of my own in it.
 

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Naruto NG: The New Era? Possible RPG?

[RP= Roleplay. Where you control a character's action in a world by typing their actions, thoughts, etc. Just like having total control of the character. Even making your own.]

I was just wondering you all's ....opinion, and what would your concern be if I turned this manga into a RP on a forum? Would anyone join? Would the [creator] of Naruto: NG allow me to create a RP out of the FanManga? What would you like to see in the RP? Any plots come to mind?

[If the RP was made, it wouldn't go as the FanManga, and it would be focused on all custom characters, instead of canons. (Canon means official characters basically. Ones that aren't made up.)][br]Posted on: January 30, 2007, 01:00:54 PM_________________________________________________http://skinfanatic.proboards78.com/index.cgi

The site's base has been made. What are your comments on it?
 

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Re: Naruto NG Chapter 04 (Version 2)

You guys have really put together something cool. The artwork is amazing, and the characters are interesting/likable. Nice work!
 
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