Naruto peeking 443

[Erimia]

tried to make him look concerned. But I think I'm improving in my weak points.


c/c's appreciated ^_^

 

[Jaime F.]

Good job Ermia, I definitely see some improvements, but why did you leave out the red sage mode markings around Naruto's eyes? Well, I hope you don't mind, but I do have some criticism's for you. 1 thing, which you're very good at, but maybe need to tone down a little bit, is the details of Naruto's hair. To me, it looks slightly overdone, and so over detailed, that it loses it's realistic qualities. As for Naruto's skin, a slightly tanner complexion would look better I think. Besides these things, you're a very skilled colorist, you just need to develop more. Obviously you have a lot of potential, and your previous coloring of Minato, was stunning. You just need to figure out how to make your colorings that good in every type of lighting situation. Well, I hope you don't take my criticism in the wrong way, I really believe in you're talent, and it's potential, so keep trying.

 

[Erimia]

Oh, no, Jaime, I post here precisely to get criticized I love critique, it's beneficial in so many ways. So thank you!

And you're right, spiky hair is something I'm struggling with, but here I actually did tone it down compared to my previous coloring. I am still a beginner at this, trying different things. Some people have done it for years and so their colorings look more solid. This is what, panel #6 for me??? Not #200 something. So you'd expect my skill to still be a bit raw at this point.

And yeah the markings *goes to fix* I ALWAYS forget something, this is so like me XD

 

[Bohemia22]

The hair is great. Massive succes. Otherwise, he looks like an alien, but I don't know if that'll help you =). Also shading on his arms could use some improvement. The lightings look weird.

 

[alpvonkri]

Looks a little strange, but It's a good job!!!

 

[Erimia]

haha thanks guys I'm trying my best to improve hopefully I'll learn on my mistakes.

 

[Googlez_kun]

awesome job!!
though you forgot naruto's kyuubi stripes on his face=/

 

[nat]

lol...I comment here coz on NF you rarely reply
Or I'm stupid and have short attention circuit....prolly the second

You are gettig better, especially with the hair and environment shading. The paper texture is good and and so is the overall shading...Though his eyes are a bit too strong, too monocolored (izzat a word?!)

anyhooo...love your work

 

[juUnior]

Awesome That's all xD

 

[Erimia]

whiskers


nat, yeah, there's too much going on on NF, and I'm too slow XD


thanks guys! <3

 

[◆ T.D.A ◆]

It's pretty good except,for the eyes, I think they are too bright.

 

[- aMt -]

Perfect

 

[Jaime F.]

Oh, no, Jaime, I post here precisely to get criticized I love critique, it's beneficial in so many ways. So thank you!

And you're right, spiky hair is something I'm struggling with, but here I actually did tone it down compared to my previous coloring. I am still a beginner at this, trying different things. Some people have done it for years and so their colorings look more solid. This is what, panel #6 for me??? Not #200 something. So you'd expect my skill to still be a bit raw at this point.

And yeah the markings *goes to fix* I ALWAYS forget something, this is so like me XD

You're welcome Ermia, and I'm glad you're mature/strong enough to handle honest criticism. As for the spiky hair, I did notice that you toned it down a bit in comparison to last time, but it still needs to be even more subtle. You know that already though, and you're working on it, so that's good. For panel #6, your doing better than most beginners, so I expect #200 to look very good. Well, for next time, try not to forget all the extra details. Do whatever you need to do to remind yourself, even if you have to write it down. These small details can sometimes make a big difference, so it's always good to include them.

 

[pineappleherb]

i think you've definitely got your own thing going on, and it looks great

the fingernail lines really throw off the realistic thing youre doing, same with the eyes

and give him the lines on his cheeks! haha

good work dude