Naruto with gamahiro and gamaken

[¬Silente]

Here i am! After 5 months of inactivity my new work xD!

hope you like it!!

 

[- aMt -]

good colorss, but de shadows is so simple

 

[sam034]

It think it looks great. Nothing too sophisticated, just very nice

 

[marina-s]

i like the colors but i agree with aMt, would be better if there was more shadows

 

[Jaime F.]

Hey Silente, welcome back, it's good to see you here. Well, 5 months is kind of a long time to not color anything, and to be honest, it kind of of shows. Of course if you start coloring regularly again, I'm sure things you'll start to improve. As for this coloring, I think it looks okay. There's definitely some nicely colored areas, but there's a few iffy spots to. In particular, there seems to be a couple of small areas where the line art looks a little jagged, but that might not be your fault. Another thing I noticed, is that you colored Naruto's jacket zipper black instead of metallic gray. That works, I've seen black colored zippers before, but most of us are used to seeing it gray. The last thing I'll mention, is that I think it would of looked better if the metal part of Naruto's headband wasn't as shiny. I can barely see the Konoha sign, but then again, maybe it's a really bright day in Naruto's world.

Well, even though I had more criticism for you than compliments, I really hope you'll be coloring more frequently. Also, just to remind you, you're always welcome here. I personally think your coloring would of came out a lot better if you had kept coloring regularly. Of course a lot of unexpected things can happen, and we all have other responsibilities, so maybe you didn't have enough time to keep coloring on a regular basis. Personally, had I been in your shoes, I would of colored a few things on my own to get back into the groove of things, and then color something to put online. Then again, a lot of the artists come here to get advice, and be critiqued anyways, so maybe posting your new coloring here was the wisest thing to do. Getting advice from the other artists here, can be very helpful sometimes, and well, its good to see that you're still around.

 

[¬Silente]

mhm thanks jaime... but to get better i need some italian tutorials because my english is too bad :/

 

[killbill]

that's really nice...simple but nice...

 

[¬Silente]

aniway thanks to all