Misc Attempt need advice

[sasiko]

i did some Edited Manga and could need advice further if this is good enough or if not what should i do to improve the quality?

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/823/devil01008.jpg

 

[Digitalr]

Burn the blacks, fix the side, it's too small.

 

[sasiko]

got it, so i just use burn tool instead of using brush?
should i do anything with the grey colors?

 

[yoniekai]

The blacks aren't black enuf, so yeah level it up a little, but try not to overlevel, this manga is pretty tone-heavy, so moving the slider will affect a lot of grays. I suggest using the curves tool instead so you'd get more detailed adjustments