Misc Attempt Need feedback

[Lukis]

There's manga I'm Editing and i still havent settled on cleaning and typesetting method for it..
here is how i cleaned it before

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and here is what i tried today

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,the grays are bit smoothened out and im not sure since im fan of cleans like this,since i cleaned this too though its HQ scan

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..any feedback will be appreciated
So as reader which one seems more nicer for eye ^^

 

[Raenef]

first it is best if you post the raws with the cleans that way the cleaner can get a better look at your cleaning

i am not a cleaner as i wont make comment to that

page 1
panel 1
move it down

panel 2
not centered

panel 3
bubble 1 not centered
bubble 2 not centered, maybe try out another layout of the text

panel 4
bubble 1 not centered, make the text bigger
bubble 2 if you put the questionmark in yourself, then it is too high, if you left it from the raws (what we normally do) we live with it
the "HO" dont rotate it that much it gets difficult to read then

panel 5
bubble 1 not centered, increase size a bit
bubble 2 not centered, increase size by 1 or 2 pt

panel 6
a bit to the right

panel 7
increase size by 1 or 2 pt and move it down

panel 8
minimal down and think over the layout of the text


page 2
panel 3
change layout of the text

panel 4
bubble 1 not centered
bubble 2 a bit down

page 3
panel 1
bubble 1 change layout of the text
bubble 2 not centered
bubble 3 not centered, increase size a bit

panel 2
bubble 1 not centered
bubble 2 move to the left

panel 3
bubble 1 increase size by 1 or 2 pt, move a bit to the right
bubble 2 increase size a bit and move it to the left

panel 4
bubble 1 change the layout, avoid the hyphen
bubble 2 avoid the hyphen
bubble 3 not centered, increase size

panel 5
not centered increase size a bit

panel 6
not centered, increase size a bit

panel 7
increase size




if you compare speedcleaning and hq, hq is the one looking nicer but most groups to speed nowadays the main question is what your group is doing or the group you wanna join