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I have some doubts about the translation of these sentences, if you need the context, some delinquents that the character beat up, call the character to the roof and bring out his friend all beaten up:

おめーが あン時 オレ達に かました分よォ
O-me ̄ ga a n-ji ore-tachi ni kamashita-bun yo ~o
that time you really took a good care of us.

ことも。。。 あろーに こっちの ボッチャンに 返ってきたって 事さ
Koto mo. . . Aro ̄ ni kotchi no botchan ni kaettekita tte koto sa
of all things... you come to this place for this little guy.

けど コイツも ハカナイ抵抗は したけどな イチオーね
Kedo koitsu mo hakanai teikō wa shitakedo na ichiō ne
but this guy also put so far a vain resistance.
 

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I have some doubts about the translation of these sentences, if you need the context, some delinquents that the character beat up, call the character to the roof and bring out his friend all beaten up:

おめーが あン時 オレ達に かました分よォ
O-me ̄ ga a n-ji ore-tachi ni kamashita-bun yo ~o
that time you really took a good care of us.

ことも。。。 あろーに こっちの ボッチャンに 返ってきたって 事さ
Koto mo. . . Aro ̄ ni kotchi no botchan ni kaettekita tte koto sa
of all things... you come to this place for this little guy.

けど コイツも ハカナイ抵抗は したけどな イチオーね
Kedo koitsu mo hakanai teikō wa shitakedo na ichiō ne
but this guy also put so far a vain resistance.
Equivalent:
先日おまえがオレ達を痛めつけた分の仕返しを
不幸にも彼が被ったという事だ
一応、彼も無駄な抵抗はしたけれど

You may want to check your translation, specially the 2nd line.
 

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Equivalent:
先日おまえがオレ達を痛めつけた分の仕返しを
不幸にも彼が被ったという事だ
一応、彼も無駄な抵抗はしたけれど

You may want to check your translation, specially the 2nd line.
these lines help a lot but there's one thing that I forgot to include about the 1st line, the beating of the delinquents and their revenge is all on the same day. And here's the page in question just in the case that I forgot something:


Edit:

Now the new translations:

おめーが あン時 オレ達に かました分よォ
this is revenge for what you did to us that time.

ことも。。。 あろーに こっちの ボッチャンに 返ってきたって 事さ
unfortunately... this little guy covered it for you.

けど コイツも ハカナイ抵抗は したけどな イチオーね
but so far, he even put an useless resistance.
 
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1st: this is revenge <--- Fine as is. You could skip "this is revenge" or "revenge" in line 1. Literal: For what you did to us last time Non-literal, "Do you remember what you did to us last time?" also would work.
2nd: fine
3rd: 一応した <-- tried XXX at least
 

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Now with your tips, this is my last translation for the 3rd line:

けど コイツも ハカナイ抵抗は したけどな イチオーね
but at least, he tried to put some useless resistance.
 
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