ugh, it's the page from real0st's tutorial, huh?
well, you even worked on the grays, but didn't touch the obvious, like cleaning/burning the blacks...
also - and i assume you want to do HQ - you need to redraw all the lines, so they don't stick together no more...
actually the only good thing are the greys, but anything else seems to be in a pre-clean status...
though you haven't done the grays on Nami...
oh, and a + for doing the borders..