old Sasuke

[§madara§]

 

[RyuSensei]

This is too plain, the coloring doesn't give out anything. It needs more shading, the sharingan should be really worked on since it's really big in that image and the cursed seal shouldn't be lined, it's horrible that way.

 

[§madara§]

ok... do not know what about ...

 

[alpvonkri]

It's OK, keep improving!!!

 

[Jaime F.]

It's OK, keep improving!!!

My thoughts exactly, thanks Alpvonkri. Ok now for my own thoughts on your coloring Madara. Well in my opinion, overall, it's a better than the last 2 colorings you made. Although, I still believe your last coloring could be considered good, depending on who's looking at it. I really like how you're trying different things with this coloring though, even the background on this one, is kind of cool. The only thing that you could of done better on, is Sasuke's left sharingan. The lineart that makes his left sharingan's design is to crowded, as well as thick, and it makes the shape of his sharingan's design look deformed. Besides that, the only thing else I can think of, is that maybe your shadows could be a little bit darker, so they're more noticable. Well anyways, you're definetly learning, and making some improvements, so keep on practicing. The more time you put into this, the more progress you'll make, so keep up the good work. Right now your colorings are atleast clean, and coherent, so I think you're doing good so far.

 

[§madara§]

thank you

 

[KnuckleheadedNinja]

nice work