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[~FrienD~]

this is my workshop....someday i'll get better...somehow...maybe...there's possibility...

Some lame character designs and some notorius hairstyle(note: this are thumbnails, click to enlarge(not that they're HQ even if u enlarge)

Spoiler: male protagonist

Spoiler: female protagonist

hope u enjoyed......
i'm out of idea for guy hairstyles. I luv women but they don't luv me.
my favorite hairstyle of them all is girl 4, it seems somehow unique and funky.
And urr... i don't have a strong story yet but i want it to be a gag(something like a strip maybe).

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Spoiler: warning highly grotesque images

i'm practicing ugly faces and expression as it is key to comedy.

a friend did the story and the drawing i only aided him in his paneling and lent him my characters(but "name" doesn't make sense at this time, coz i still don't and can't think up of some solid story)

sorry though... its not in americanese, ill post it in english when i've one the entire manuscript

 

[niiica]

Your protagonists look awesome, keep up the good work!
Also, that extra you got there is pretty sweet, I was trying to figure out what language it was until I realized that I could understand it lol. But yeah, it's good and funny. Hopefully you'll get them finalized and show us clean images. I'll be looking forward to it.

 

[~FrienD~]

wow you understood it and i thought we originated from aliens?

 

[niiica]

lol XD
I think for the male protagonist--- none of the hairstyles work. And what's up with the scarf? The girl looks best either the first or second hairstyle. The first one being for a fashionista kinda girl and then the second one for a sporty girl or you can even say a tsundere one.
But yeah like I said, good job. I'm really amazed.

 

[~FrienD~]

Oh no i've got a big problem! i've been having lots of ideas about story plots but when i'm starting working on it i get lost, like how should i introduce characters or what the first chapter should look like. Will thumbnails help me in this situation? but when i start doing thumbnails i end up choosing none because new ideas arise and so on.... which results on me doing nothing.

i need some advice.......

 

[TitaniumChloride]

You could try writing it all out first maybe, or keep doing more thumbnails until you've found an idea you really like?