Misc Attempt Over Rev! Cleaning, Editing & Typesetting

[SLAiNTRAX]

Hi. I'd like your opinion on my typesetting also cleaning and editing. So far I think typesetting is my biggest issue. I'd like some pointers on how I should I improve it.

Heres a chapter I did some time ago.

Finished
http://tinyurl.com/yc3qvaj

RAW
http://tinyurl.com/yeh3dz4

Please point out even the slightest details.

Thanks

 

[thefolenangel]

Hi, this is a tankobon raw which means is very easy to clean (only leveling)
So, try doing a magazine raw~

 

[SLAiNTRAX]

Thats why I asked to check my typesetting. I have cleaned crappy raws before. The only thing I'm new at is typesetting.

 

[Alan Smithee]

The typesetting is not bad, quite dull maybe. The font used for the thoughts should be different from the font used for the speech since it's different in the raws themselves. Also, you seem to put bold or italic emphasis on words here and there and I'm not so sure why. It's not there on the raws and feels a bit over the top. I didn't really look at each page in depth in terms of sizing, positioning and the like.

No idea why he needs to try working on a magazine raw, there are plenty of groups that manage to F**k up using tankobon raws by denoising them or only using levels to clean them and then there are plenty of HQ groups who only work on series in tankobon raws for the sake of quality.

 

[progste]

you have to erase the fonts, than use the line tool or the pen tool to redraw it and then write then new text, the most used font is anime ace, but you can use what you want, just remember to stroke it two pixel. (go here for a tutorial on typesetting http://senbonzakura.kageyoshi.net/2009/05/02/typesetting/)
for the cleaning, you left some withe dust on the blacks, fix it with burn tool
hope this is helpfull^^

 

[puma13]

what the name of the manga?

 

[SLAiNTRAX]

Please read the title Over Rev!

Thanks to everyone that responded. Will try to not abuse bold anymore haha.