Pain

[§madara§]

 

[Jaime F.]

Hey not to bad Madara, the background, and the coloring itself, isn't as proffesional looking as some of the other colored versions of this I've seen, but overall everything looks good. Your coloring is very neat, and all the colors are in the correct places. I think some of your sun spots, or the circular reflections of light, whatever you want to call them, need to be brighter, and more lit up. Instead of a product of the light source, some of them just look like colored in circles, especially the one inbetween the new female body of Pain, and the Fat ninjutsu absorbing Pain. Besides that, I would say this is one of the best looking page colorings i've seen from you. Good effort, and neat coloring, are the best qualities you got going on for yourself right now. Now all you need to do, is increase the overall quality of how your colorings look, and perfect the skills you have already as much as you can. By the way, your use of shadows, and shading skills are decent, but there's still plenty of room for improvement.

 

[RyuSensei]

Shadows need to be put better on the lineart.

 

[alpvonkri]

Good job!!!