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This is my first pic colored ¡¡¡ yeaahhh !!!
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It's seems nice for the first time! However, I don't like the color you chose, and I think it's a little flat. You need to add more shadows to his cloak, hair and skin. Moreover, there are small parts that aren't colored, such as the parts between the background and the hair.
Keep up the work and post here more coloring.
Keep up the work and post here more coloring.
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it's good for a first try..the eyes should be purple all the eye,not just the pupil and the shadows near the lips are a bit odd too..
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i like it, as its your first time coloring i would suggest that you use pen tool if you're using ps.
dont use the blur tool if you're doing cel-shade picture,
what happened to his mouth? O.O
did you use gradient on his face? it doesnt look too good =[
his neckle should be blackish grayish not black n white
as aldoor already said more shadows to his cloak, hair and skin
and as killbill already said the eyes should be purple all the eye,not just the pupil.
keep posting your colorings and work on your style and there will be some good stuff coming from you
dont use the blur tool if you're doing cel-shade picture,
what happened to his mouth? O.O
did you use gradient on his face? it doesnt look too good =[
his neckle should be blackish grayish not black n white
as aldoor already said more shadows to his cloak, hair and skin
and as killbill already said the eyes should be purple all the eye,not just the pupil.
keep posting your colorings and work on your style and there will be some good stuff coming from you
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ok, I take note of all your advice, the truth is I'm fairly new to this coloring, I use the Ps, thanks for the criticisms as he learns more.
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your very welcome. we learn through mistakes =]
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YoI can see; Gradient, Cell shade and Soft shade.
You need to be consitant with your teachnique(s). I can see many styles of colouring but you should not be getting ahead of yourself. When experianced artists mix techniques they have already fully understood how to use these techniques greatly thus it compliments the work and makes it nice. You are a begginer so please practice more.
My advice would to be use cell shade and then progress from there on.
Also please colour everything to the lines, it makes it much more presentable and neater
Well for your first I would say good job, I hope you prosper and I also hope you continue posting in MH
You need to be consitant with your teachnique(s). I can see many styles of colouring but you should not be getting ahead of yourself. When experianced artists mix techniques they have already fully understood how to use these techniques greatly thus it compliments the work and makes it nice. You are a begginer so please practice more.
My advice would to be use cell shade and then progress from there on.
Also please colour everything to the lines, it makes it much more presentable and neater
Well for your first I would say good job, I hope you prosper and I also hope you continue posting in MH
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=D improve more in the definition of colors, try to capture a certain realism to your work.
Is so good for first'
Is so good for first'