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[TemplateR]

Hello,

this was my first Naruto-Coloring made 2-3 Month before ( but really I don´t know more, when I colored it xD ):




Plz comment my first Naruto Coloring^^

 

[Gaara_dono]

Good work for a first colo ^^

 

[black_burn]

nice job.

 

[TemplateR]

Here is my overworked Version, which I mad few hours ago:

 

[KALiZU]

Good job! Keep it up! But I think you should make the shadows more solid. They look kinda smudged (especially some dark yellow parts in the hair).

 

[TemplateR]

Good job! Keep it up! But I think you should make the shadows more solid. They look kinda smudged (especially some dark yellow parts in the hair).

Oh..the dark parts on the hair and some on the skin shouldn´t be there.

I will overwork it.

But what do you men with smudged ? Should it darker or whar ?

 

[KALiZU]

^ I mean it looks smudged. Like mud or something. Shadows should have more shape. ^^

 

[TemplateR]

^ I mean it looks smudged. Like mud or something. Shadows should have more shape. ^^

Ah....ok......my english atm bad^^


I had also made shaper the shadows, but it doesn´t passed on the colored panel, so I have took this version^^