I guess I missed the first version, but I'm sure whatever improvements you made, were for the better. Well, I definitely like what I see. You did a good job with Hinata, and you did even better with Pain. I love the expression on Pain's face. He seems, well psycho, but he's clearly frustrated, and a bit confused about Hinata's short act of bravery. Well, after reading this chapter, I'm definitely looking forward to seeing how this fight ends. I wonder how much of a power difference there is between Naruto's 4 tails form, and his new 6 tails form.