Pein-Naruto

[JMC]

Cleaned By Kain

original 1

i forgot put it

 

[*Mel*]

^-^ I really like the pein panel u coloured good job on that one (the textures look pretty good in it)
As for the naruto pic, I didn't like it so much... The BG is awesome, but Naruto's shadows look a bit ackward to me, especially over the face (nothing that can't be fixed ) Also this whiskers look kinda weird, dunno ^^"
Kepp up this way =D

 

[Jaime F.]

Nice JMC, welcome back. I've got to admit, I've missed your colorings a little bit. These 2 panels look awesome, especially animal realm Pain. I had Kain's version saved, but I thought the eyes were a little bit to tinted. Your version of this panel, looks just right though, so I'm definetly going to save it. As far as the other panel you did, I think it looks great. The background isn't the original background anymore, but you replaced it with something I think looks pretty good. The only thing I could do without, is some of the lines that go sideways, and across the panel. There's 1 that crosses inbetween Naruto's nose, and mouth that just doesn't look good there. Well anyways, despite my dislike of that 1 line, I thought this panel was worth saving to. Since there's only 1 thing I might consider a mistake, and since I haven't seen you for a while, I will start you off with 5 stars. Just to let you know though, if there was an option to give you 4 and half stars, instead of 5, that's what I would of given you. I don't think you rating should be below 4 though, so hopefully there aren't any haters around.

 

[JMC]

thank you u both

i really dont like the naruto panel so ill try to fixe

 

[Jaime F.]

thank you u both

i really dont like the naruto panel so ill try to fixe

You're welcome JMC, and I hope you do fix that Naruto panel. The mistake you made looks really easy to fix, and it's so close to being perfect, that it would be a shame if you didn't fix it. Anyways, I didn't see your second coloring of animal realm Pain, until I read your response. I actually like the second version just as much as the first one. They're both colored with a different style, and they both look good. I think it's really cool, that you're capable of coloring with more than just 1 style. It's very progressive of you, and I happen to be the same way with the music I write. Even though I mainly compose rock music, I can also play other styles, like metal, punk, funk, jazz, and blues. You're lucky that you're talented enough to be able to do that. Being capable of useing different styles, opens up a lot of possibilities for you, and gives you more than just 1 option. Not everybody is capable of doing that, so be happy that you can.

 

[TheChosenOne]

Looks Great, especially the Pain panels.

 

[Toobi]

viejo esta excelente me gusta la segunda version, sigue asi!

 

[Orochimaru]

i like the second version ^^
nice ^^

 

[Egaki 21]

both are good ^^ awesome

 

[lee-nus]

the top one looks good!

 

[Kazi]

i like also both, thanks ^^

 

[bone7]

really great job! i like the first version.

 

[JMC]

thank you people

i already edited but..if still suck tell me

 

[Jaime F.]

Nice JMC it looks a whole lot better. I compared your older version of this panel with the new one, and I can tell you made some good improvements. At first I didn't mind the whiskers, but now that I've compared the 2, Mel was right. Naruto looks a lot better without them on his face, especially in this particular panel. The other improvements you made were also good, you changed the shape of the shadow on Naruto's face, and got rid of that annoying line that was under his nose. Well anyways, the only thing I see that's stopping your coloring from being 100% perfect, which most of the time impossible to do anyways, is that there are still some very faint lines going across Naruto's face, and metal wrist guards. It kind of gives it an in action effect, but I think it would look better without them.