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Great colours and bg ( u got to teach me how to do a bg like this *-*)
I just didn't like his hair, it looks weird to me for some reason
 

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Beautiful BG on it!
I really like the color scheme. :D
 

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Nice JMC, good background, and coloring of Pain, I like it. Actually the first time I saw this panel, in its original form, I didn't really it, but the way you colored it makes it look pretty good, so good job.
 

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well done, but i'll give my thoughts on it nonetheless!
*the forehead protector could use some more work. details, to be more specific, like the "scar" and the bolts/bolt holes or whatever they are.
*if you really want to be consistent in your coloring, you have to pay strict attention to the light source. here, pain is standing in very strong direct light. basically, only the edges should be highly contrastive. you could still make out his features, and it would make for more interesting coloring too, i think.

that's all, dont really have anything else to nag about... ^^; well, maybe the nose could use another minute's work! XD
the background is pretty cool, just pay attention to the light source and it will look more natural! :thumbs
 

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Gotta agree with Lee on the forehead protector which would need more work on the depth(look at the scar thingie, we still see the lines and you only used a single color, that's no good and look at the upper side, same pattern, no shading) and on the lightsource(some of your highlights are misplaced, if I got your coloring the light's coming from behind so there shouldn't be any yellow highlight on his nose piercing or on his eyebrows).
Anyway, it's still a good coloring so keep it up JMC :]
 

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awesome bg and color! *-*
 

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amazing dude :)
great color + BG ^^
 

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Wow man.....

Great job
 

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thanks Mel,Jaime,Lee,Ryu all u people

its true about the forehead and the light,,,,now i see dont make sense how i make it

and the forehead and hair im still learning so ill try next time make a good work
 

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Stunning coloring, JMC. :)
 

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great colors used, however I think the center of hair escaped a bit of its style
 

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very awesome art!
 
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