dunno about bakuman, the plot and storyline is really awesome but somehow it's not used properly, like i find the flow of the story sucky

is it just me or maybe i'm just so picky about this. i mean imagine bakuman being done by mizuki kawashita (for the light-headed comedy feel) or yumi hotta (of hikago) instead of tsugumi ohba (ohba makes the flow so mature... and combining occasional comedy with that kind of stuff is kinda weird)... and anyway this japanese pop culture references is already old... the best one that used it would be genshiken or nhk, right? so bakuman has to surpass those two legendary series which so far what it did on the 2 chapters is.... eh eh.
i mean cmon man, the characters are perfect, both akito and moritaka, including azuki, but it's kinda unbelieving for the main girl to have a secret crush on the lead character already, i mean character development please! (like no, moritaka is a nobody jerk, but then she is shocked by how direct he is to ask her to marry, i mean "no other boy has done that before! is he nuts?? but why am i blushing?"), and moritaka and akito are too direct, like i know the author wants to settle the plot ASAP but at least make it more convincing, like akito is constantly frustrated by how he cant find the perfect companion to his authorship and then by a freak accident he discovers moritaka's skill but then he is disgusted by how apathetic moritaka is and they quarrel and then in another introverted moment they finally learn that each one is the best companion for each like what the fuck i didn't realize i've been typing like hell, well the point is that i'm just a little frustrated now

i'm #6 in the total rankings now but this job is still the shit, and nobody is still replying to my other applications! fuck this imma buy 10 joints later