please rate my clean

[kangxi]

my first edit job
basic word editing without cleaning the borders

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my second edit job
with cleaning and adding of borders

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questions
is the first edit good enough for md quality?
is the second edit hd quality?

comments and suggestions for improvement
thank you for your time

 

[tradedaemon]

I'd decrease the font size a bit or move some text around so it's not up against the borders, and maybe signify the shouting with bold. Think the first box, right side edge is slanted too. Other than that, looks good, mq at least. Oh, and i'd crop the left side a bit more, up to the edge, since there's no border.

 

[kangxi]

thanks!