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zerh

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story by z-comics and art by me

title - Mahō shōnen
read from right to left

a long time ago there was a group of 7 girls who fought to protect our world from darkness, demon and the occasional alien invasion using the powers of love, kindness and friendship. They became the strongest Mages in our world. one day a male mage came and tricked the group, toying with them emotionally which lead the leader of the group to disappear forever.
Years later the world has changed. the 6 remaining Magical Girls now have created a world where individuals are selected by there spell-system to receive the powers of a Mage; the face of magical girls is now that of a systematic and organized group. The only thing is after the events that unfolded the Council of 6 decided that men would never be allowed to receive magic due to the fact that their hearts are tainted by perversion and so do not know the power of love. Any man who does somehow get magic will be hunted and treated like public enemy number one.

One day a Familiar who is chosen to be the guide of Hikari Shizuka gets lost trying to find her destined master. Lost and confused she accidentally runs into a high school boy by the name of Yami Shinjitsu and accidentally kisses him. This creates a Pact between the two giving him the magic meant for Hikari. whats more, this teen is very cold and uncaring as well as a delinquent; he is similar to that of the Mage from years ago. Now the familiar must find a way to get Yami to find Hikari and transfer the powers before the magical girls in the area find and kill them both.

One-shot incomplete, i'm trying to do a page a day.
My drawings is not that good though haha, i try to draw it as best as i can, can you guys tell me what you think about it.


7/50 - https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=0B27Hq1K9DrpBVzdVdHZkM0lOYXM&usp=sharing

Nectar
https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=0B27Hq1K9DrpBT19WaVRLRXVQRFE&usp=sharing

Beetl
https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=0B27Hq1K9DrpBbDRHR0dRRjR2ZVk&usp=sharing
 
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Hey, Zerh, I disagree, I think that your drawings are quite good. That guy's face in the first page is awesome, although his right eye looks a bit out of place. Please let us know when you've finished the chapter^^
 

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thank you! and about the dude's eye, yea kind of misplaced maybe i'll fix it hahaha

Update 2 pages
 

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WOW, JUST WOW, amazing manga for a rookie!? i can't believe it. it looks like i'm reading some pro's manga ,best of luck. btw i am an amateur writer and i sometimes draw manga but its a real examples for others!!!!
 

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I Can't Draw At ALL! So I Do Like your Drawing But I really Like The Story So Far.
 

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wow amazing really good try your best to draw i love your story and i really want to read it one day.
 

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For a amatuer it really is a inspiration! great job and the story is something new. Best of luck.
 
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