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Heyo.
First off, I've no clue if this is the right forum to post this.
Just joined as you might see.
Shortly said I've begun to write short stories lately, and with a couple of friends I've begun to write a small what I hope to make into an amateur-manga later on.
I'm more basing it onto humor rather than action, romance etc.
But with humor comes a couple of problems I'd request aid in.
1) How to keep the humor from not getting old, nor being too predictable.
2) How to maintain the flow of the plot itself, within the humor.
#1
So.
I'm interest to hear from you people on how you'd try to keep from the humor going bland so to say.
I've asked around some of my own friends, and the response was somewhat neutral.
"Try to keep the humor something that you wouldn't expect"
I'll not provide one of my writings as an example (at least yet). Since I first and foremost wish to hear what twists/gimmicks/etc. You'd use yourself to keep the humor from going annoyingly bland.
Yes I am in a repetetive mood today apparently.
#2
I'm unsure if this is a problem, but I am having doubts in my head that a story formed and revovling around small gags (4-panel gags even) can be any good at all.
The response I've gotten has been.. Well a certain someone responds with "Cromartie Highschool" to my doubts, which boosts my self-esteem a little but still.
Should I have a decent medium between the gags and humor, and the actual plot itself.
That's all, and pardon me if this seems like rambling and unclear.
I'm not the best at explaining things.
First off, I've no clue if this is the right forum to post this.
Just joined as you might see.
Shortly said I've begun to write short stories lately, and with a couple of friends I've begun to write a small what I hope to make into an amateur-manga later on.
I'm more basing it onto humor rather than action, romance etc.
But with humor comes a couple of problems I'd request aid in.
1) How to keep the humor from not getting old, nor being too predictable.
2) How to maintain the flow of the plot itself, within the humor.
#1
So.
I'm interest to hear from you people on how you'd try to keep from the humor going bland so to say.
I've asked around some of my own friends, and the response was somewhat neutral.
"Try to keep the humor something that you wouldn't expect"
I'll not provide one of my writings as an example (at least yet). Since I first and foremost wish to hear what twists/gimmicks/etc. You'd use yourself to keep the humor from going annoyingly bland.
Yes I am in a repetetive mood today apparently.
#2
I'm unsure if this is a problem, but I am having doubts in my head that a story formed and revovling around small gags (4-panel gags even) can be any good at all.
The response I've gotten has been.. Well a certain someone responds with "Cromartie Highschool" to my doubts, which boosts my self-esteem a little but still.
Should I have a decent medium between the gags and humor, and the actual plot itself.
That's all, and pardon me if this seems like rambling and unclear.
I'm not the best at explaining things.