Looks good Undying for the most part. The sunset like effect you're useing looked better in you last coloring of Pain, but it looks ok here to. Now I know this might be open to interpretation, but I tend to think it looks better when artists make the bottom last space in Naruto's mouth teeth, instead of a tongue. I think Emma145 colored it the same way in her coloring of the chapter 418 cover, so you're not the only one. Well anyways, I think you could of been a little more creative with this coloring, but it's fine the way it is, so no worries.