Sakura

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九千以上だ! / Kyuusen Ijou Da! / It's Over 9000!
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the hair is a complete mess,since it does not make sense(do you see persons with hair structure like this:p)
the shading is a bit boring,because you just made it darker around the lines.I think you can do better^^
 

Aldoor

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Well, it's far from being perfect. However, I think it's a good start of a new style. I hope next time will be better.
 

lee-nus

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i think you need to do some serious thinking on what exactly you want to achieve "painting" this way. its way too hysterical for me, esp with the leaves. :/
 

pineappleherb

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wtf get rid of those leaves man, or atleast put them in the background or something
 
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