sasuke 408 two versions

[madaramaster]

here are the my two versions of the cover of 408

version one ( without akatsuki cloak ) http://madaramaster.deviantart.com/art/The-Solitary-Genius-100038706

verion two ( with akatsuki cloak ) http://madaramaster.deviantart.com/art/Akatsuki-Sasuke-100481121

personally i like the one with the akatsuki cloak . hope you guys like them

 

[RyuSensei]

The redraw is good but you gotta work more on the shading, I can't even define where the light source is.

 

[Jaime F.]

Decent colorings madaramaster, I like the one with Sasuke in the Akatsuki outfit the best. The best criticsm I can give to you, is the same as RyuSensei's, because your shading skills are ok, but they could be a lot better. Just like he said though, settle on one definite light source, and base your shadow work on that.

 

[Orochimaru]

not bad madara ^^

 

[madaramaster]

thanks guys i'll try to work more on the shading