Sasuke Vs. Raikage

[Emanuelao]

Hope you like

 

[e-maney]

like it

 

[lee-nus]

i think the biggest problem with it that the lines are not very good. try to slap in more shadows too!

 

[killbill]

The lines aren't good and sauske's colours are a bit weird but i like the golden glow around raikage!!

 

[Emanuelao]

Tnx for comment

 

[- aMt -]

good, dont is really awesome ^^

but is litle good, good luck with next job

 

[Black Lagoon]

yes, I like it

 

[soDeq05]

keep it up! =)

 

[Aldoor]

There are parts (especially on Sasuke...) that you forgot to color!

 

[-Ren Boy-]

Where can I start. First off the lineart is not the greatest. When someone has crappy linart it can really degrade the colours and the entire piece itself.

You was on the right road with the shadows as in you had good colours, but you fell off that road half way there. To me this picture looks flat especially Sasuke so take note; add more shadows and be creative as in see where this shadow goes

if it goes wrong you can always Ctrl + Z it away

The lightnight around both Sasuke and Raikage, the colours were decent, but you made it a bit too transparent.

The background. What I see from it is that Sasuke and Raikage are at fast speeds and from their point of views they can't see around them because they are moving to fast. It is a good interpretation if that is what it is, but it is all around the place

Nevertheless this is still a good picture and thanks for putting the effort in