Snake on a Plain! Sasuke

[Uriel]

The Snakes Of Sasuke, Lines By Shade.
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/54040928/
Hope you like it, but PLEASE give me some critic. I really hope to learn, this is my second Color form Naruto and I Want to improve.
Sorry for my bad english ._.

 

[Raseru]

I like it (I can't give much critique 'cos I'm not that great of an artist) but here goes: I think in some areas it's too bright, try to darken it... just a bit. But other than that, great work

Love the title btw XD

 

[Adam_xx]

Wow, nicely done! I like how your shading.
But don't you think the snakes are a bit too.. "bright?"
Lol, well just like Raseru, I'm not the one to comment on art. xD

 

[ddadain]

I like your style...

Very good Basing is great! Contouring is nice... Shading is excellent...

Lighting is iffy... I am a QCer so I can get really critical... beware...

The lighting is off because the angle is off... they already have SHADOWs that indicates the light source is from ABOVE not from the sides or horizontally aligned o_o definitely not below ._.

The snakes are nicely done, but I must remind you that they are NOT green >_> Evidence is Anko and Oro... Oro taught Anko the jutsu, and her snake is ALSO white :P From this fact... :P Bleh X_X

The background wall looks EMPTY o__________o Very empty... which is NOT GOOD...

You wrongly colored the thickness of Suigetsu's sword as brown o_o (same as the background color)

Some lineart shadowing can be removed XD Cause they ugly... like the shadows on the shorts of Juugo... it really looks bad in color >_>

Too much BROWN... o_o

Effect used for floor and walls not good enough to give it a sense of dimension O_O

XD

BUT!

I'M VERY VERY VERY IMPRESSED XD It's definitely an ADVANCED COLORING! G8 Job!

Wanna color bleach too? Join Isane XD

 

[Uriel]

Thanks All! DDadain, I LOVE have criticis, because I love to Improve. I accept ALL of your critics, and I'll try to do better next time.
I choose Green for the Snakes Because I Like It more than purple, white or whatever.
Again, Sorry For my Bad English.
pD: I don't Know Bleach for do that .-. But I can do a Try, I Gues...

 

[bax]

Ermm nice <333

I like it

 

[kadoman]

Oh, no, the snakes aren't too bright, that's part of the style. Who said the snakes have to be purple? Or dark for that matter? In the real world, snakes come in a variety of beautiful and bright colours - even bright red.

I think it's a really interesting and fresh approach and I guess I tend to place more importance on that than on technical perfection (but I know you artists tend to lean towards the technical aspects of it). The choice of colours, by the way, is exquisite. Absolutely stunning. Personally, I like the different shades of brown and mustard, reminds me of Indian art work. Very different from what others have done. I wonder what some of our resident artists would make of this?

You're obviously very talented. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work.

 

[qwan3356]

it looks great, i can't come close to doing anything like that, all i can do is lil basic stuff like in my Sig.
Awesome job!

 

[Halcyon Dreamz]

Good job on this. Especially lovin the BG XD Nice warm tones

 

[Uriel]

Thanks ToT
*Gets Emocional
*Leave Crying xD


Pd: I have to work on my english ...