Archived The Hang Out Thread v8

[gdupninja]

Alright ill do it just for you. Zwivx thought it was funny. It started out as a journel and then turned into a story idea. Wow i have quite the imagination. Im imaging a club scene where everone is dancing to some techno music. Versace will be doing the robot and then out of nowhere kill some guy with a wrinkled shirt or something.

 

[gluttony]

you know sometimes i have crazy ideas like that but only while i'm sleeping. and then when i wake um i really feel like i should write that, but i never do... too lazy!! =P
hey how is the conquer the world thing? =P

 

[gdupninja]

I dont know. we havent been on that in a while. I forgot what we were doing before we stopped.
Well i got to go. See ya later. Bye!

 

[gluttony]

bye gdup! send me that story ok? ** =D

 

[radical3113]

gdup send me a copy of "fatal fashion" as well i like the way ur thinking. and i like the fact that its in 2030 , coz its not too far in the future that normal lifestyle would have changed dramatically but u still have freedom to blast ideas. ive been waiting to see what ur writing style is like.

*maybe u should give us a chapter of it every week *.
p.s "shamo" is f***ing sick definitly a page turner

 

[~Lilium~]

gluttony, Monday is a holiday in America, so most schools get the day off

actually, technically the holiday is on Sunday, but we get the three day weekend anyway

3 day weekend too? next week i have a 5 day weekend for thanks giving!!!

you have never gone abroad? me neither this is going to be the 1st time

where are you going?

Nope ive never seen a mountain. Aside from the beach ive never seen any type of beautiful land scape up close. I wouldnt mind living in another country. Im gonna have a career in either marketing/fashion or buisness so i might just have to leave the country.

my teacher said something that the only mountain in florida is space mountain... what is that?

Yay friday baby! 3 day weekend. YES!!!!!!!
Well today was alright. I followed up the goodwork i did yesterday in Algebra 2 class with more good work. I did a problem on the board and every thing. Your boy ninja actually particapated in a math class today.

same here!!!

 

[sakura_hime04]

aww... are you not busy anymore then?

I''m still busy but bot like last week

got a point there zombies do revive!!!

And zombie is immortal

1,000 posts, rabb, nice. Congrats!

Omedettou-ne bunny-kun

not you too Lil!!! I thought you were on my side!!

I'm on your side Pyon-pyon but you can must give us a new picture though

actually, technically the holiday is on Sunday, but we get the three day weekend anyway

This sunday form me is for work

 

[worm34]

Hi everyone who remembers me, I'm finally back and hope to stay posting here. It hasn't been a good year for the first half, but things are starting to turn around. I hope to make some new friends on here again.

 

[PaperYomiko]

3 day weekend too? next week i have a 5 day weekend for thanks giving!!!

Enjoy your break, Lil! I didn't realize Thanksgiving was so soon, but this makes me so happy....such a great holiday, just for eating tons and tons of great food all day~~

I'm on your side Pyon-pyon but you can must give us a new picture though

This is coercion

This sunday form me is for work

noooo, work on a Sunday?!

I'm sorry

Hi everyone who remembers me, I'm finally back and hope to stay posting here. It hasn't been a good year for the first half, but things are starting to turn around. I hope to make some new friends on here again.

hey worm!! Glad to have you around again, hope you have fun!

and I hope things do start to turn around for you, too

 

[rabb]

*reads the thread, but skips the whole thing between gluttony and ninja* ah, so wuts new people? i was just reading the news... x.x not a good time to be a leader of a nation.... Pakistan's rioting, a city in Mexico is flooded, an armed Venezuelan revolt, violent anti-government rallies in Georgia (the country).... but the French like us now, and in the end isn't that all that matters? i mean, pay now mind that three years ago, when they had an anti-American president, we all but called them terrorist harborers, but hey, we love this new pro-American guy! *collapses* i have to stop watching the news... riots and political bs...

Omedettou-ne bunny-kun

err... how do you say "thank you" in Malay? assuming that what you said is something similar to what gk said i should start learning Malay x.x every third person, it seems, speaks it as their first language...

EDIT: Terima kasih Sakura-chan

I'm on your side Pyon-pyon but you can must give us a new picture though

well that puts you in mine a lil's camp

This sunday form me is for work

well that sucks were do you work?

Enjoy your break, Lil! I didn't realize Thanksgiving was so soon, but this makes me so happy....such a great holiday, just for eating tons and tons of great food all day~~

so what will our resident vegetarian be eating, i wonder...? my aunt and sister are both vegetarians, as well, but both make an exception on thanksgiving. however, my sister is by herself in Arizona (i feel so bad for her ) so I'm not sure what she will be eating. all my family in this area, except maybe my oldest sister (i forgot if this is our year, or my brother in law's family's year...) are heading to my grandparents house not far from where i used to live, so I'm gunna see if i can stop by the mcdonalds i used to work at (which will be re-opening any day now, and a lot of my friends are going back to work there). depends on if it is open or not...

it is also my mom's birthday. and for everyone who doesn't remember their American history, her birthday is the same day president Kennedy was shot.

 

[Ominae]

Dibs here!

Monday next week is Remembrance Day for the Canadians. No class on Monday (actually, the holiday's on Sunday), but that means no Kendo session. Darn! Can't see my kendo buddies.

 

[gdupninja]

gdup send me a copy of "fatal fashion" as well i like the way ur thinking. and i like the fact that its in 2030 , coz its not too far in the future that normal lifestyle would have changed dramatically but u still have freedom to blast ideas. ive been waiting to see what ur writing style is like.

*maybe u should give us a chapter of it every week *.
p.s "shamo" is f***ing sick definitly a page turner

I havent started writing that yet but when i do ill show you. Damn if i had my binder on me i would have shown you the first page of Riddle me this, Riddle me that. Oh well. And yeah I told you Shamo was raw!


Well i dont know worm but Welcome Back!

@ Lilium what are you gonna do with all these days off of school?
Space mountain is a ride at Disney.

Hey ominae is kendo fun? Is it hard to learn?

 

[radical3113]

well gdup wat are u waiting for, the year 2030? *smiles to himself and is proud of the terrible joke*

start writing and give me a chapter a week (at least half a page a week .........pls)
is "Riddle me this, Riddle me that" finished? or just started? or is it ongoing? either way i want it now ..............NOW ( demanding aren't i?)

 

[gdupninja]

Im not at my house and i dont have my binder. Well the riddle story is due on thursday so ill have it by like 2sday. Shit if i had my binder id post the first page. Its basically describing the ship hes flying in and a bit about himself. Remember im in 10th grade so im not Stephen King but i think its good enough for yall to enjoy.

 

[radical3113]

niiiiice intro. it breaks open the driver psyche and gives us a peek into the character. i like the fact that he has contempt for the girls, and see's them as nothing more than kids "Daddy is just gonna pull out his shiny credit card" hinting that their like children or small animals easily swayed by shiny objects, also says he thinks they have no real value for money that they see it as a shiny card that daddy holds.

at the beginning of the drivers rant "They'll have to go out and get jobs, pay bills. Yeah its all good now but these bitches wont be laughing when they have to bust their butts and pay taxes.HAHA." u can see by what he says after that, that statement is not based on fact but rather the fact that he wants to see them suffer, these can be percieved as a low form of sadism.

this sentence"they'll have to..." also shows his contempt for the middle-higher class and the laughter at the end soothes this hatred, he uses the laughter as a joke to forget the pain of not have loads of money, much the same way ppl drink to forget.

"wait who am i kidding..." i like the way, although its his thoughts he's almost in conversation with himself. hence the word "wait" stopping his train of thought and bringing himself back to the Grimm reality.

the best has to be the profound statement at the end "screw it all " is interesting because it shows that his thoughts wasnt just a rant to himself. it shows that this guy is at his wits end, its ironic seeing as whats gonna happen next.

 

[gdupninja]

Well that was just a rough draft. im gonna change it a few times before its done. Do you think its a good idea to start off like that? What point of view should i write with?
Was that honestly good?

 

[radical3113]

i think you should do parallel narratives of the driver and Versace Cabachi . although cabachi is the murderer i can already see the signs of sadism in the driver, and it would be nice to know what goes on in that head, especially when the girls get really scared , i wanna see what jokes he cracks to himself. . plus he might also try and get cabachi to wack a couple for financial benefit, we know he's low on funds.

 

[gdupninja]

Yeah good ideas. You know what I think Ill write this for myself. I can write more than 10 pages about this. 2500 words wont be enough. This shit is going to the literary fair baby!
Be honest radical did you really like the beginning? What do I need to work on?

 

[PaperYomiko]

hey guys, maybe I've missed something, but this seems like a personal convo that might be better done through PM or MSN. I totally wouldn't mind you talking about your story here, gdup, if it's in a way where everyone can participate in the discussion, but as it is right now, nobody else really has any idea what you guys are talking about, you know? Just a suggestion for the future, this sort of convo should really be done by PM or MSN ^^

 

[gdupninja]

Well it was my fault. I posted it then deleted because I didnt really like it. Radical saw it before i deleted it so he knows about it.