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RyuSensei

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If I was you I would go rework on it, honestly it's hard to say it's not bad, I've seen your works so far and you did better than that shadingwise. You should give it another try and not get lazy cause you can get a better result than that.
 

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Yeah, like I said before this a very good idea/concept that you came up with thewar. Although it's an ok coloring, I think it has the potential to be a lot better. Just as Ryusensei says If I were you, I would re-work it. When I look at the original lineart I can see this coming out much better than it is currently. So I hope you don't mind the criticsm, and consider re-working this. I'm sure it could look a lot better if you do. By the way, I think Tsunade came out looking the best out of all the Hokage's.
 
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