this is my first art... please comment...

ivanus

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this is my first art work... i dont have skill for this.. but i did my best :D
drop some comment please...


v.1



v.2
 

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Its not bad for a first try, but the first one is overly sharp, and the second is too blurred.
 

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Great job for ure first, I like how u did the sharingan in the first one.
 

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thanks for ur all comment...

@abcd how can i make it not too sharp.. coz i used only adobe photoshop

@burn thanks..
 

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i agree with others, this is great for a first try..
hope you improve more and more in the future ..
:)
 

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you got a bright future dude, keep practicing
 

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the eyes was good..
more practicing = perfect
 

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I like the first.Anyway you've done very good job.
 

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I like the first one but overall, keep practicing. :D
 
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