this is my first art... please comment...

[ivanus]

this is my first art work... i dont have skill for this.. but i did my best
drop some comment please...


v.1

v.2

 

[abcdefghijkL0L]

Its not bad for a first try, but the first one is overly sharp, and the second is too blurred.

 

[black_burn]

Great job for ure first, I like how u did the sharingan in the first one.

 

[ivanus]

thanks for ur all comment...

@abcd how can i make it not too sharp.. coz i used only adobe photoshop

@burn thanks..

 

[weixiaobao]

i agree with others, this is great for a first try..
hope you improve more and more in the future ..

 

[Windmillblade]

you got a bright future dude, keep practicing

 

[incubus]

the eyes was good..
more practicing = perfect

 

[Meri_maslinkata]

I like the first.Anyway you've done very good job.

 

[lordHokage]

I like the first one but overall, keep practicing.