Misc Attempt tip

[ris-b]

i know the repaint is weird but overal the clean? Some tips?

http://img19.imageshack.us/my.php?image=80216671cq6.jpg

http://img294.imageshack.us/my.php?image=21749248ir2.png

btw its franky house raws if some one would minde.

 

[hatsuharupeace]

Nice work with the redraws, nothing much which I can comment on that, except just practise more and more to get better.

Your grays look a bit funky though, those big dots in the grays, did that happen when you were using the clone tool?

 

[ris-b]

it looks like that becous i made a pattern a little wrong in every point where it looks like the edge of the squeare i the gray it is 2 px of nearly the same collor in a line where every else its like every gray and white so.

But thx for the comment and its what im doning right now. Downloading random raws and cleaning a page or two

 

[wade69]

size is to small it should be around 1200px not 1000px.

 

[ris-b]

the raw was 1000 px so... And at the time there was only that one. But thx for the input

 

[hatsuharupeace]

Always try to work on RAWs which are around 2500px - 3000px in height, it makes cleaning hell of a lot easier than using those 1200px height LQ RAWs.

 

[ris-b]

but how would you rate that this clean then?

 

[hatsuharupeace]

MQ/HQ. Just the cloning ruined it from becoming a HQ clean.

And also, work on the lines for your redraw, especially on the tripod legs, you can tell where you drew it manually. Try out the Pen tool, it's useful for redrawing.

 

[ris-b]

ok thx