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Re: Pending translations

I posted this before there was a help a translator section. but my stuff has been cleared so it's all ok
 

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Need help with a few lines

Hello. >>;; Incredibly unskilled translator here. My usual PR/teacher is MIA at the moment, so I thought this would be a good place to ask. :( I'm not even sure if what I've translated so far is right, so please correct me if I'm wrong. P-please don't hit me for the fail. :p Totally got lost in the last few lines, because I've no idea what 'カり●ロ' stands for.

P21
シン:  。。。びっくりした
Shin: ...How surprising.
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シン: 目あけたら すごいかわいい子 いるから
Shin: I wake up and there's an incredibly pretty girl sitting next to me.
シン: まだ夢 みてるのかと思った
Shin I must still be dreaming.
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ネイロ:王子ですか!?
Neiro: ( Is he a prince!? ) 

P22
邪気のない目 
Said without malice

シン: 君アレだよね カり●ロるに似てるよね

ネイロ: よく言われます

ネイロ: そして 天然。。?
 
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Re: Need help with a few lines

No one will hit you...so don't worry. >_<"

I'm not that skillful at making it sound natural and stuff, but...I'll try...>_<"

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シン:  。。。びっくりした
Shin: ...How surprising.
I think "...That really surprised me." would sound better though...>__<"
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シン: 目あけたら すごいかわいい子 いるから
Shin: I wake up and there's an incredibly pretty girl sitting next to me.
シン: まだ夢 みてるのかと思った
Shin I must still be dreaming.
It sounds OK..."And when I woke up, I saw this really cute girl sitting beside me, / I actually thought that I'm still dreaming."
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ネイロ:王子ですか!?
Neiro: ( Is he a prince!? ) 
It's already fine...:3

P22
邪気のない目 
Said without malice
"Innocent eyes"? I mean, yeah, 邪気 is malice. 邪気のない would mean "without malice" as you said...I don't know if there is any other word that means the opposite of malice (since you can do it that way as well), but...>_<"

Problem though, is 目 might change in meaning depends on its context. >_<"

シン: 君アレだよね カり●ロるに似てるよね
Not so sure as well...sorry...but you're sure that it's not a person's name, right? >_<"

ネイロ: よく言われます
"Well said."

ネイロ: そして 天然。。?
Is he talking about a person? Or something else? 天然 actually means natural, but if he's talking about a person, it can mean someone who makes a lot of silly mistakes...>_<"

Don't know if that helps. You might as well wait for other people to check it as well, since I'm not sure of a lot of these myself. :p And if possible, could you please post up the manga page or the name of the manga and the chapter or maybe a transcription of the page or something, so some people can see what the context is like. That will help a lot. >_>"
 

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Re: Need help with a few lines

Thanks, really helped! The manga's Obaka-chan, Koigatariki. I don't think I can post the chapter since it's not on the web yet, and my connection's bad. :( The context's pretty simple though - basically, Neiro (girl) found Shin sleeping somewhere. She's sitting next to him when he wakes up, and then that conversation happens.

>___<; I was actually going to put 'eyes with no malice', but I thought 'said without malice' might make more sense. Guess I was wrong.

And, nope, 'カり●ロ' isn't a name... not a name from manga, anyway. Someone suggested that it might just be gibberish (it's a pretty silly manga), but I wanted to make sure. D:;;

And I'm not really sure who Neiro's talking about in the last line, but I was thinking it probably had something to do with Shin's 'カり●ロ' comment. D: I thought she might be talking about herself, or him...? EDIT: Btw, when he makes that comment, she has, a, err... '|D;;' expression.
 
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TL check: Nana to Kaoru ch19

This translation is from Ladholyman. He's not too confident, so we'd like it if someone(s) could double check it for us. Any help is appreciated!

N2K 19

Title Page

Title: Chapter 19
Starting on the 3P

Page 2

Tachi: ...Like I said,
Kaoru's mom invited me in, and...

Tachi: That's it.
Now,
let me hear your side of the story.
Um...

Tachi: B-Breathers?
Chigusa-san?

Nana: Kaoru went jogging?
With Tachi-san?
Oh yeah, I did see them...

Tachi: Asking Kaoru for... help?

Kaoru: My stupid mom!

Tachi: H-Hey!
I... I don't really understand...
But... This... This...

Page 3

Tachi: This is what you call S&M, right!?

Nana: Y-Yes, you could say that.

Tachi: S&M!??
With a master and a slave!?
With whips and candles and stuff!?
That really painful looking thing!?

SFX: No!
It hurts!
Ow!

Nana: So that's the image she has...
It's nothing like that.
Breathers are more...

Nana: More healthy!

Kaoru: Healthy?
Healthy S&M?

Nana (Box): Wow...
It's really hard to explain this to someone.

Nana: It's not like we're using whips or candles or anything painful...
Um...

Nana: More like wearing a collar,
getting tied up,
getting pictures taken, and so on.
Eh?

Tachi: What!?
You were forced to do all that!?

Page 4

Tachi: T-That's completely wack!
You should stop!

Nana (Box): Tachi-san is really worried...
...about the two of us.

Tachi: T-T-That's so violent!
You let him use your body like that!
That's not what you call a breather!
Something is definitely wrong here!

Nana (Box): She's really worried about us.
I'm really happy, but...
But...
But...

Nana (Box): She doesn't understand what this Breather is all about.

Tachi: I-I'm worried.
About you, Chigusa-san. And Kaoru, too!

Nana (Box): She doesn't have to spell it out like that.

Tachi: I don't get this weird relationship between you two.

Nana: Saying that it's weird...
I know that already!

Tachi: Anyway!
Even if Chigusa-san asks you for help,
you're at fault here, Kaoru!
Why did you accept!?

Page 5

Tachi: When we were jogging together,
I've been thinking how nice of a guy you were.
But...

Nana (Box): What's with her?
This is a bit...

Nana (Box): You only went jogging with him.

Tachi: Don't tell me, Kaoru,
that you were keeping quiet about Chigusa.

Nana (Box): You keep using that tone...

Nana (Box): to describe Kaoru!

Tachi: You were Chigusa-san's t-t-t...

Tachi: T-t-t-...
Toy...

Nana: Don't you say that!

Nana (Box): You don't know anything about Kaoru!

Nana (Box): Jeez!

Nana: You've never even tried it yourself.
Don't be so prejudiced.

Page 6

Tachi: W-What?

Nana (Box): You don't know anything...

Tachi: Prejudiced?
Of course, I've never done S&M before,
but I...

Nana (Box): About my breathers!

Nana: Using that tone of voice...
You're being prejudiced!

Tachi: What!?

Tachi: I'm being worried, as a friend!

Nana: That's why this is all a misunderstanding!

Tachi: If you think about it normally, something like this isn't a breather!

Nana: I know it's weird! But!

Nana: This is a real breather for me!

Tachi: What? With these handcuffs and collars!?

Tachi: That's no breather!

Nana: Well...

Page 7

Nana: It makes me feel good.
Very good, actually.

Nana: And Kaoru is very gentle...

Kaoru: Eh?

Tachi: What? How is tying someone up,
being gentle!?

Nana: Right now,
I...
I still think about that.
What a shame!

Kaoru: What!

Kaoru: I'm about to burst out laughing!?

Page 8

Tachi: That's quite weird!

Nana: No it's not!
You've never done it before, so you're prejudiced!

Tachi: I know all about it even if I've never done it before!

Nana: No, you know nothing! Nothing!

Kaoru: Nana, you...
Hey, wait?

Tachi: You're the one that knows nothing!

Nana: You don't know anything!

Tachi: Don't talk like you know everything!
Listen to me!

Nana: Since you don't know anything, shut up!

Tachi: Okay.
I get it.

Page 9

Tachi: Your next breather...
I'll take part in it!

Tachi: If I don't think it's a breather,
then I'll stop this once and for all!

Nana: Sure!

Nana: But in exchange,

Nana: if you can understand, even just a little bit,

Nana: then you apologize properly to Kaoru!

Page 10

Tachi: Chigusa-san!
I didn't think you were so stubborn!

Nana: Me too!
I didn't think that Tachi-san will be so hard to talk to!

SFX: Door slamming.

Nana: Jeez! That Tachi-san is so mean!

Nana: Using that tone of voice...
Hey, Kao...

Kaoru: I won't do it!

Page 11

Kaoru: It's all messed up now!
Spilling the beans to Tachi like that...

Kaoru: You made your breathers into some sort of contest!

Nana: I-I'm sorry, Kaoru.
I'm really sorry.
But I...

Nana: I can't forgive her, no matter what.

Nana: Why am I being so emotional?

Kaoru: In any case,
making a promise like that...

Kaoru: I'm fine with Nana.
But to tie up someone else...

Nana: Ah...

Kaoru: Think about my circumstances.
The one I want to tie up,

Page 12

Kaoru: is only you, Na...

SFX: Huh!?

Nana: Na?

Page 13

Nana: Only me?

Nana: Na?

Kaoru: I-I-I-It's nothing!

Kaoru: Shit!

Kaoru: That was close!

Kaoru: I didn't say anything!

Kaoru: I said nothing!

Nana: Na?

Kaoru: Oh yeah!
This is a good chance for me to study!
How to tie someone else up!
Yes! That's right!

Kaoru (Thought bubble): I shouldn't be so persistent about Nana.

Kaoru: I guess it can't be helped!

Kaoru (Thought bubble): I almost let Nana know that I like her!
Dangerous!

Kaoru: C-C-C-Can I do this?

Kaoru: I'll be getting ready for next Sunday!

Kaoru: What? Both of them?
With my own physical strength?
Shit.

Page 14

Box: Next Sunday...

Page 15

Tachi: Well then, let's do it!

Tachi: I'll see just how bad
this S&M thing is!

Page 16

Tachi: Hey, Chigusa-san.
You do remember our promise, right?

Tachi: I'm serious!
Having a weird S&M relationship isn't good
for you or for Kaoru.

Tachi: In any case,
about this S&M thing.
Are we doing it in our swimsuits?

Tachi: He did tell us to wear it.

Nana: He doesn't want to dirty or ruffle our clothes, perhaps?

Tachi: And what's with this vinyl sheet?

Nana: Probably something Kaoru thought up...
I think.

Tachi: He's quite prepared, I see.
Hey, Kaoru!
We're done changing into our swimsuits!

Kaoru: Well then,
I'm coming in.

Page 17

Kaoru: You want a drink?

Tachi: Ah, thanks.

Tachi: Isn't this room a bit warm?

Kaoru: You want one too, Nana?

Nana: I-I'm fine.

Nana: What's going on?
It seems like I'm the most nervous one here.

Nana: Kaoru's all relaxed.

Kaoru (Box): Nana...

Kaoru (Box): She'll be fine with this, right?
Watching me tie up someone else.

Tachi: Thanks for the drink!
Let's start!

Kaoru: Well then, Tachi.
Can you wear this?

Tachi: Eh? Over my swimsuit?

Kaoru: Well, once you get it on, you'll understand.

Page 18

Tachi: Huh?

Tachi: What is this?

Kaoru: Looks quite S&M, right?

Kaoru: There was a suit that came with it,
but I broke it.

Nana (Box): T-That's...
That's...
For Tachi-san to wear, I see.

Nana: There are gloves and boots that go with it.
But I guess you only wanted a general feel for it.
The look is the most important.

Kaoru: It fits you quite well, Tachi.
Sexy!

Tachi: Hey!
Don't say such disgusting things!

Kaoru: So how does it feel, Tachi?

Tachi: Well...
A bit tight.

Tachi: Like I'm being tightened up.

Kaoru: So?
Does it feel good?

Nana (Box): It does feel good...

Tachi: It doesn't really feel good.
And this...

Tachi: It seems like it's too big for me. There are gaps everywhere.

Kaoru: That can't be helped. This is the right size.

Nana: Shut up, you.

Page 19

Nana: It feels kind of weird.

Tachi: Hey!
Don't touch me anywhere weird!
If you do, you lose automatically!

Kaoru: I know.
But now that I see you up close,
you have beautiful skin, Tachi.

Tachi: Hey!
What are you saying!?

Nana (Box): This feels weird.

Kaoru: But really, your skin is very nice, very smooth.

Kaoru: Even though you are very muscular,
you do have the body of a woman.

Tachi: What are you saying, you i-idiot!

Kaoru: You have a good figure, Tachi.
Quite slim.
Your breasts are just the right size, too.

Tachi: Hey!

Tachi: Pay attention to what you are doing!

Kaoru: I'm going to tighten this up a bit.
Here!

Tachi: What!?
Hey!

Page 20

Kaoru: Okay!
I somehow got the shape I wanted.

Kaoru: How is it? Does it hurt, Tachi?

Tachi: It doesn't really hurt...
But what's with this posture!?

Kaoru: Well, you're so charming, Tachi, that's why.

Tachi: That's not what I'm talking about!

Page 21

Kaoru: Well then...

Nana (Box): What!?

Nana: That's...!

Page 22

Nana: Kaoru!? That's...

Tachi: Wha...!?

Nana (Box): That's my...

Tachi: What!?

Nana: Huh?
"My?"

Nana: "Mine!?"
But...

Nana (Box): B-But Kaoru...
That looks a bit...

Tachi: Hmmm!
Hmm!!

Nana (Box): That looks a bit...
Too rough...
Right?

Tachi: Hmm!?
Hmmm!!

Nana: That bite gag too...
Was mine...

Page 23

Kaoru: Well then.
You're up next, Nana.
Sit over there.

Kaoru: Put your hands
behind your back, please.

Tachi: Hmm!!!
Mmmm!!!

Page 24

Kaoru: You need to be punished!
SFX: Tighten.

Nana: Ah...
Baahhh...
 

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Re: TL check: Nana to Kaoru ch19

I'm not sure I will be able to help much, but a link to the raw or a transcription of that chapter would be helpful for those that could review it.
 

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Names

I started to translate Kenji from chinese raws. Because I don't know any Japanese I am looking for some help with the names and would apreciate if somebody could correct/translate them.

The hero is 貴拳兒 (拳児 in jap. original). Is it Goh Kenji?

His mother: 貴淳子 Goh Atsuko?

And the father was called 阿仁 by his own father. Is this his real name or just the way he is called in the family?

Then there are some random guys from school:

太一, 攻介 and 吉林 How is their Name?

Thanks a lot!
 

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Re: Names

The hero is 貴拳兒 (拳児 in jap. original). Is it Goh Kenji?
that's right. it's Goh Kenji.
His mother: 貴淳子 Goh Atsuko?
it could be Atsuko or Junko.
And the father was called 阿仁 by his own father. Is this his real name or just the way he is called in the family?
i think it's his name but not sure how to read it.
太一 = Taichi
攻介 = Kousuke
吉林 ...not sure.

sorry couldnt really help. >_<
if you have any Japanese raw, i can help you more though.
by the way, main character's family name in Japanese writing is 剛. so name of other people could has changed into Chinese character as well, i guess. (may be that's the reason why i can't read them?)
 
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I'm Twi, and since my search for a TL isn't going well I've decided to start TL'ing. I finished translating Ar Tonelico ~Arpeggio~ Phase 6 and need someone to look it over and point out my mistakes and help me correct them. And if you like the series feel free to join as my TL for the series.

You can read previous release here: http://mangahelpers.com/s/twilightdreamsscans/releases/?manga=1866

You can find the chapter raw + Tl here: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=FZZG120R

Translation:

Page 48
カウロン/どうしたんだ。。。
Kauron/ why are.....
Page 49

Page 50
Phase 2: 人ならざる幻
Phase 2: The illusion that doesn't become the person

Page 51
な。。。
wha....
つ!
!
Page 52

その身体能力。。。/父親譲りというべきか
Those physical ability..../ He must have inherited it from his father
なにを。。。?/カウロン。。。
What...?/Kauron....
くっ。。。
Kuu....
Page 53

Page 54

チッ。。。//やはり駄目か。。。。/レベリス病じゃないのか?
Tch....//it's no good..../Is it the Reveris diesase?
無駄だ/彼らは傀儡
It's useless/ they're just puppets
カウロン。。。?
Kauron...?
一体さっきから何を言っているんだ?
What on earth are you talking about?
Page 55
ーっ
-!!
ぐあつ。。。//はずしたか
Guahhh....//
カ。。。/カウロン。。。?
ka.../kauron...?
Page 56
。。。[カウロン]?
...[Kauron]?
我は/対レーヴァテイル専用ウイルス試験体
We are.../Exclusive-Use Anti-Reyvateil Test Viruses


Page 57

レベリス●ウイルス●ブロトタイブ
Reveris●Virus●Prototype

Page 58

紅い眼。。
Red eyes...

Page 59

まさか。。。
No way.....
ウイル。。。ス。。?
Vi...rus..?
何を言って。。。
What are you saying......
カウロン。。。
Kauron...
カウロン。。。!
Kauron...!

Page 60

!

くっ。。。
kuu....
何処を見ている?
Where are you looking?
Page 61

!!

な。。。/何だぁ今の音
wh..../What was that sound just now?
。。。。この波動/詩魔法も感じますが。。。/ソネット
This surge..../It feels like song magic..../ Sonnet

Page 62

つー事はまたレべりス病。。。//恐らく。。。でも。。。
Is the reason the Reveris disease....//Probably....but...
この感じは。。。/でも まさか。。。
This feeling..../but it can't be...
へ?//。。。いえ どうやら/ウイルス体が近くにいるようです。。。
he?//....no it seem like it/A Virus is nearby.....
ウイルス!?//エスパーダまだ帰ってきてねぇし。。。心配だな
Virus!?//Espada still hasn't come back...I'm worried
 
small text: (それはやっかいだなー)
small text: It's a pain-

オイラちっと捜しに行ってくる//待ってください!
I'll go look for him//Please wait!
わたしも行きます
I'll go as well
Page 63

へ?/ダメだっつーの! まだフラフラじゃんが//構いません
he?/No way man! You're still staggering//It doesn't matter
わたしはこの目で確かめなければ。。。
I have confirm it with my own eyes....
。。。しょーがねぇな//でも無理はすんじゃねえぞ//アダジオ。。。
....Can't be helped then// But don't overdo it//Adajio...
ホラとっとと行こうぜ!
Come on, let's go quickly!
う。。。。
uh.....
Page 64

。。。やはり致命傷にはならぬか
....I expected that to be a fatal wound
ぐっ
gu....
何故攻撃せぬ
Why aren't you fighting back
ならば汝も/父親と同じ末路を辿れ
In that case, you.../can share the same fate as your father

Page 65

Page 66
おかえりエスパーダ
Welcome back, Espada

Page 67

がっ
Gah!!
ぐっ。。。
guu....
死ね
Die
!

Page 68

エスパーダ!
Espada!
。。。。。/汝ら。。。
....../You're....
。。。。/カウロンさん。。。?
...../Kauron-san...?
え。。。何だ?/おっちゃんどうしちまったんだ?
eh......What?/Why's the old man here?

Page 69
おっと/ハテイト!
whoops/Hatito(Winds)
え!?
eh!?

Page 70
(hymmnos)
Protect!


うわあっ/な。。何でだ!?
Uwahh/ho....how!?
無駄だ
It's useless
。。。
...

。。。撤退しましょう//え。。。
...We have to retreat//eh...?

Page 71
このままでは不利です/アダジオ エスパーダをお願いします//お。。。おう
We're at an disadvantage/Adajio, Espada, please//oh....okay


。。。カウロン。。。。
...Kauron...

逃しはせむぬ
Let them go

Page 72
Hymmnos
..Fairly concentrated, and wishing this to end soon...

Hymmnos
I shall save you.

詩魔法使ったりして身体大丈夫か?//はい。。。/大丈夫です
did the song magic heal his body okay?/Yes.../It's fine
small text: (具合まだ。。)
small text:(His condition is still..... )
。。。。/済まない。。
..../Sorry....
どころでエスパーダありや一体どういう事だっつーの//何でおっちゃんがいたんだよ?
What on earth happened in that place espada?//What was the old man doing there?

Page 73
。。。/解らない。。。//でもよ エスパーダに襲いかかるなんて。。。/明らかにフツーじゃなかったし。。。
.../I don't know myself....//But espada, you were being attacked..../It was obviously unusual......
俺が知るか!
I know that!
カウロンさんは。。。ウイルス体なのですね
Kauron-san is......a Virus

Page 74

え?/違う!/先程のカウロンさんの瞳が真紅に染まっているのを確認/あれはレベリス●ウイルス固有の特徴//違うって言ってるだろう!
eh?/You're wrong!/Some time ago I was able to confirm Kauron-san's eye turned red/That's a pecuilar characteristic of the Reveris●Virus//What you're saying is wrong!
レーヴァテイルではない カウロンさんにあの症状が表れたという事は。。。//黙れ!
Kauron-san's symptoms manifested but he wasn't a Reyvateil.....//Shut up!!
。。。

じゃあ。。。/レベリス病の原因って。。。その。。。おっちゃん。。。? //違います
Then..../The old man is the source of the Reveris Disease....?//No
Page 75

な。。。何でそう言えるんだ?ソネット//見た限りですが症状が若干異なるようですし
wh...what are saying then, Sonnet?//Looking at the few symptoms as best I can, I have to disagree
レベリス●ウイルス[本体]はプラティナ存在するからです
The Reveris●Virus[Real form] exists in Platina

Page 76
!
ある レーヴァテイルのコスモスプィア 寄生しています//その本体を
デリートする手段が未だ発見されていない為解決に至っていないのです
Certain Reyvateil Cosmospheres have the parasite//We don't have a very good solution to delete the real body just yet
じゃあ。。。かウロンは。。。/。。。違うんだな?
Then.....Kauron is...different?
ですが。。。/症状の類似性から二つのウイルス体に全く閑係がない訳ではないと思います
Yes..../There is no reason at all for two of the symptoms similar to the viruses to influence another


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じゃ。。。じゃあ//レベリス病の大元が別に存在するにしても。。。
Th-Then//The Reveris disease commander-in-chief doesn't particularly exist....
何で カウロンがウイルス体なんだ/今までずっと一緒にいたんだ
Did you think Kauron is a Virus/All along while we were together
それなのに信じられるか!
Do you expect me to believe that!
。。。でもそれが事実なんです
....But that's the truth
わたしにはそれ以上の事は解りませんが。。。。
This is far greater that what I had thought.....
!/わっ!?
!/Waaa!?

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暴れてやがる。。。。!//どうにかして止めなければ。。。
It's starting to get violent.....!//We have to stop them somehow.....
でも牽制は効かないんじゃ。。。。//はい。。。
But can we affect them.....//Yes...
ですから残されている方法は/操っている元を絶つというものです
There is another way/We have to destroy the original manipulator
それってまさか。。。?//はい。。。
You don't mean....?//Yes....
ウイルス体をデリートする事です
We have to delete the virus
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何だと!?
What !?
エスパーダやめろって//ふさけるな/そんな事出来るか!
Espada stop it//Stop joking/about doing something like that!
。。。しかしこのまま放置しておく訳にもいきません/手をこまねいていては事態が悪化するばかりか
.....But if we leave thing like this/The situation is only going to get worse
操られているレーヴァテイル達の身にも危険が。。。//うるさい!
Theirs also the danger of more reyvateils being manipulated//Shut up!!

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解ってる//だけど。。。
I know that/ But.....
。。。。/エスパーダわたしは
...../Espada, I...
あなたが直接手を下すのがいいと思っています
Hoped that you would give me a hand
な。。。
wh...
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向こうもきっとそれを望むと思うからです
I'm sure that over there he feels the same thing
。。。それに//たとえあなたに出来なくてもこのままではきっと誰かが止めるでしょう
....Besides// If at this rate you don't stop him, who will?
その時あなたは後悔しないと思えますか?
At that time, do you think you won't regret it?
。。。。。。。。。。

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。。。。。。。。。。

。。。そうですねこんな選択急に突き付けるのは酷でした
....It was too big of a chioce to throw at you
ソネット。。?
Sonnet....?
わたしは行きます
I'm going
レーヴァテイル達が苦しんでいるのを/放っておく事は 出来ません
The suffering of those reyvateils.../ Is too much for me to ignore
ソネット。。。!

Sonnet...!
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待てよお前。。。
Wait, you....
放せアダジオ//ダメだっつーんの!
Let me go Adajio// No way man!
ソネットを止めたところでどうすんだよ/誰かがこの状況をどうにかしなきゃいけないのは変わらねーし
If sonnet doesn't go to stop it, who else can!/The situation is only getting worst
それに今おっちゃんの前に出たってエスパーダは戦えないじゃんか//さっきみてーにやられちまうだけだっつーの!
Besides, right now you can fight against the old man//You're still suffering from just a little while ago!
。。。。

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とりあえせずちっと落ち着こう。。。/な?
First you need to calm down..../okay?
。。。。っ//くそ。。。!//何が何だか全然解らない
....ugh//Damn...!//I don't completely understand what's going on
結局[カウロン]は。。。//存在してなかったって事なのか!?
Afterall [Kauron]...//Do the things you did really don't exist!?
[やっぱりお前はあの頃のままなんだってね]
[You're still upset about that time]
カウロンは。。。
Kauron is...
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俺は何を信じたらいいんだ
What am I suppose to believe!
。。。親父。。。!
...Father...!
エスパーダ。。。
Espada....

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わっ
Waa!!

!/ドッペル。。。
!/Doppler....
何だよっ/今はお前にかまってる場合じゃないんだっつーの!
What is it!/ Now's not the time for you to pop out!

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あ。。。
ah...
ま。。。/待て
Wa...Wait!
エスパーダ!?
Espada!?
ちょっと待てっつーの!
Wait a sec!
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何なんだ。。。。あのレーヴァテイル達は。。。
What with....those reyvateils...
レベリス病の末期症状に酷似しているが/彼女達はまだ発病すらしていないかった筈。。。//一体どういう事なのか。。。
It resembles the terminal symptoms of the Reveris Disease/Those girls weren't even sick yet//What on earth could have caused such a thing...
くっ
Ku!

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事例の通り気絶させようとしても効果がない。。。
We can't try making them faint like before....
くそっ/どうすれば。。。。
Damn/ What do we do.....
あれは正規のレベリス病ではありません
That not the regular Reveris Disease
君は。。。
You're...
下がっていてください//おいっ。。。
Please step back//Hey...

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。。。レーヴァテイルが何の用だ
....what business do you have here Reyvateil

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彼女達を解放してください
Please release those girls
受け入れられないのであれば。。。
If that isn't acceptable. . .
わたしが相手です
I'll be your opponent
 

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Re: Names

yes, it is a problem with chinese mangas. you never know which names are the same and which were modified, but since I did not find any japanese raw and only speak chinese I just have to deal with the given circumstances.

Thanks for your answer. It helped me a lot.
 

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Inu x Boku Secret Service chapter 1

01
時間は重みだ
Time is dignified

僕は そう思う
That is what I think

02
「メゾン・ド・章樫(アヤカシ)」へようこそお越しくださいました。
Welcome and thank you for coming to [Mezon De Ayakashi]


本日より当マンション専属のSS(シークレットサービス)が、
From today, our mansion's exclusive SS(Secret service) will

あなた様の生活を心身とも万全にサポートさせて頂きます。
provide our fullest support in mind and body of your livelihood.

03
ただし、当方にはいくつかのヒミツがございまして…。
However, we do have several secrets...

決して口外なさらぬよう、お約束の程、お願い申し上げます。
We ask that you give us your word not to say anything to anyone.


…続きは後ほど(汗)
 
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Re: Inu x Boku Secret Service chapter 1

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「メゾン・ド・章樫(アヤカシ)」へようこそお越しくださいました。
Welcome to moving over to [Mezon De Ayakashi]
Welcome and thank you for coming to [Mezon De Ayakashi]
(ようこそお越しくださいました is a very polite phrase to welcome/thank the person for coming)

03
ただし、当方にはいくつかのヒミツがございまして…。
However, we do have several secrets on our side...
However, we do have several secrets...
(In this case 当方 refers to the "we" so the "on our side" is not needed)

決して口外なさらぬよう、お約束の程、お願い申し上げます。
We sincerely need to have your promise of not spreading the word out no matter what.
We ask that you give us your word not to say anything to anyone.
("Not spreading the word out" makes it sound to me like as long as he/she is discreet, they can speak of the matter. 口外なさらぬ means to completely keep it a secret. Not one word to anyone, so this should probably be changed to something along those lines).

Those are the only quick corrections. The rest looks good. :)
 

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Re: Inu x Boku Secret Service chapter 1

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僕には悪癖がある。
I have a bad habit

妖館(アヤカシカン)って知ってる?あそこに新しい入居者ですって
Do you know about the Ayakashi-kan? I heard that there is a new tenant.

SS(シークレットサービス)付きのセレブマンション?
That celebrity mansion that comes with the S.S.?

え あそこって変人ばかりの屋形じゃないの?
Ehh, isn't that the mansion full of weirdos?

うそ おばけ屋敷って聞いたけど?
Really? Isn't it a haunted mansion from what I've heard?

幼い頃からのもので 自分では制御できない
It's something I've had since I was young, and can't control it.

ほら あの子よ
引っ越し屋さんが言うには どこがのお嬢様ですって

Look It's that child
From what the movers said, she's the daughter of some rich guy.

へー
Hhe~ (*impressed expression*)

注目の的ですね
You're the center of attention

はっ 暇な主婦に注目されて嬉しいか?
Hah. Are you happy getting attention from bored housewives?

井戸端会議の議題になるのはごめんだ 
さっさと仕事をしてもらおうか。

I don't want to be the topic of the housewives' gossip circle.
So you're going to have to get the work done promptly.


ドーン
*mood deepens*

05
無駄に虚勢をはって
悪態をついてしまう

これが僕の悪癖。

Unneeded bluffing and using abusive language.

That's my bad habit.


妖館って知ってるか?あそこに新しい入居者だって
Do you know about the Ayakashi-kan? I think there's a new tenant.

どこぞの旧家のお嬢様らしいよ
She seems to be the daughter of some old family.

あの大財閥白鬼院家のだろ?
It's that big financial clique's Shirakiin family right?

そーとー性格キツイらしいね
Her character is rumored to be acrid.

でもすんごい落ちこんでるね
But she seems to be feeling really down.

ホントだ
You're right

凛々蝶(りりちょ)着いてたのか
言えって

So you've reached, Riricho
You should have told me

はっ
(*taken by surprise*)

何だ 反りの塚か
ふん 久しぶりだな

Oh so it's Sorinozuka there
Pffh It's been a while ya

きりっ
(*straightens up*)

あれ 今落ちこんでなかった?
Huh? Weren't you upset just now?

06
あいかわらずだな
まだムダに悪態ついて自己嫌悪してんの?

You just like before
Still hating yourself for using abusive language?

荷物運び手伝いに来てやったぜー
I've come to help you with the moving of your stuff

ふん 結構だ
それと知った風な口を聞かないでもらおうか

僕と君はただ実家が近所というだけの間柄だろう?

Pffh It's enough
And also, please don't talk to me like you know me

Our relationship are just only being neighbours in our parent's home right?

え-?
Ehh--?

でも色々知ってるぜ 小6の時
But I know quite alot when at the sixth grade

凛々蝶ちゃんゴハン一緒に食べよー
Riricho-chan, lets eat together~

群れるのが好きだな
You sure like being in the flock huh

って断っておきながらその後泣きながら
After rejecting like that, you were crying

ちっ 違う!!
You're wrong!!

あれはただのアレルギー性鼻炎だ!!

That's just my allergic rhinitis!!

他にもさー ガキの頃
ケンカした後なんかは必ず

おぉう
Ohhh

ものっそい丁寧な謝罪文が...

There are others like~~ when we were still kids
After a quarrel or something there is definitely

an extremely polite letter of apology...

ちっ 違う!!
You're wrong!!

あれはただの字の練習だ!!

That's just me practicing writing words!!
 
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