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Hello there

How's the following translation? I would appreciate a check and/or corrections. And thank you for your time!



It... it’s as if my whole body had been struck by tens of thousands of volts...
 

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Jackk said:
Hello there

How's the following translation? I would appreciate a check and/or corrections. And thank you for your time!



It... it’s as if my whole body had been struck by tens of thousands of volts...
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The word "struck" doesn't show the devastating effect of えぐられた, but I think your translation is just fine.
 
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