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Hi, I need some help with some of these sentences. I'm not too accurate at my translations.
Here's the link to the chapter, if it helps to check.

Soil Chapter 60
88pg1
.........やれ
……...do it
ハ夕迷惑な........
It’s annoying…….

101pg14
[せいぜい頑張んなさい横井君]...と言って.....
….Say…. [at most good luck Yokoi-kun]

102pg15
彼は横井の居場所を知らず
He did not know the whereabouts of Yokoi
その後も接触していないようだよサクラ君
Sakura-kun and I do not seem to contact thereafter
幸福にもなにも判ってはいない
Doesn’t know anything of happiness
馬鹿者のふりをして馬鹿者を全うしたただの鹿者だ
It's deer's just that fulfill the fool by pretending to fool

104pg17
つまりその小さな花弁は彼のささやかな好奇心の現れというわけだ
It appeared was this little petals was his modest of curiosity
 

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A few comments:

.........やれ
……...do it [/SPOILER]
やれ:Gosh/Phew/Geez

ハ夕迷惑な........
It’s annoying…….
(fine)

[せいぜい頑張んなさい横井君]...と言って.....
….Say…. [at most good luck Yokoi-kun]
Say --> Saying
せいぜい頑張んなさい means: Do your best at least. "Well, good luck to you, Yokoi-kun" would work. "At most" sounds off here, so get rid of it, and add a comma before Yokoi-kun.

彼は横井の居場所を知らず
He did not know the whereabouts of Yokoi
その後も接触していないようだよサクラ君 
Sakura-kun and I do not seem to contact thereafter
These 2 lines make a single sentence. The speaker is talking to Sakura-kun. Add a comma before Sakura-kun when you translate. It os NOT Sakura-kun and I, The guy (彼 which you translated as "he") is not in contact with Yokoi.

幸福にもなにも判ってはいない
Doesn’t know anything of happiness
馬鹿者のふりをして馬鹿者を全うしたただの鹿者だ
It's deer's just that fulfill the fool by pretending to fool
* of happiness ---> Fortunately,
* (なにも判ってはいない馬鹿者 can possibly be a set. Verify with your context.)
* 鹿者だ(deer): Change it to 馬鹿(バカ)者 a fool

つまりその小さな花弁は彼のささやかな好奇心の現れというわけだ
It appeared was this little petals was his modest of curiosity
So, the small flower petal is a sign of ...
 

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Hi Mikkih,

Thank you for the help. It makes sense now.
 
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