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I had to work and start college and lots of busy stuff has happened in two weeks! But now I've noticed my Japanese is a bit rusty. :facepalm

These two pages are a bit of a "...huh?" for me. I recognize somethings but I haven't practiced daily so...
please help senpais!

This one I just need to translate the last panel with the girl that has black hair. Technically it's the 2nd to last panel.

This one the last two panels at the bottom.
 

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1st page

Black-haired Girl: Look! One of your groupies popped up!
Popular guys sure have it tough, huh?!

Guy’s Small text: Who says “groupie” these days? Just say “fan”!

Umm, the girl uses “wanfu”, which means a fan. I guess it’s an older term because he tells her to use “fan”. I substituted “groupie” for “wanfu”, but you can use whatever weird term we have for “fan” here. I don’t really know any, eh heh.


2nd page

Girls: Way to go, Ayaka~~~

Guy: Well, that went well.
I did well, didn’t I?

Not really sure about this part. Did you translate this part? We can compare our interpretations and figure it out together.

Black-haired girl’s small text: Not really.

Not sure about this part either. Did you translate this too? ^^;

Girls: You know, Touyou-senpai might have the looks, but…

Girls: He doesn’t really seem like he's cut out to be the boyfriend type.
Small text: There’s no way that can be true, though.

Light-haired Girl: Ahhh~ I’ll remember this moment forever.
 
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1st page

Black-haired Girl: Look! One of your groupies popped up!
Popular guys sure have it tough, huh?!

Guy’s Small text: Who says “groupie” these days? Just say “fan”!

Umm, the girl uses “wanfu”, which means a fan. I guess it’s an older term because he tells her to use “fan”. I substituted “groupie” for “wanfu”, but you can use whatever weird term we have for “fan” here. I don’t really know any, eh heh.


2nd page

Girls: Way to go, Ayaka~~~

Guy: Well, that went well.
I did well, didn’t I?

Not really sure about this part. Did you translate this part? We can compare our interpretations and figure it out together.

Black-haired girl’s small text: Not really.

Not sure about this part either. Did you translate this too? ^^;

Girls: You know, Touyou-senpai might have the looks, but…

Girls: He doesn’t really seem like he's cut out to be the boyfriend type.
Small text: There’s no way that can be true, though.

Light-haired Girl: Ahhh~ I’ll remember this moment forever.
WHat parts didn't you get??
I did translate a lot of it.

BTW, thanks so much for your help.
 

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No problem! And I was talking about this part:

Guy: Well, that went well.
I did well, didn’t I?

Black-haired girl’s small text: Not really.
But it wouldn't hurt if you posted your entire translation for those two pages. :tem
 

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Oh I didn't get that part....
LOL.
This is what I have and I'll add in what you put Okay?

Page 8:
Misao: You seriously don’t believe Otome do you?
Touyou you’re not going to be her boyfriend…
Are you listening?
Misao: You seriously don’t believe…
You saw with your own eyes that guy kissing her…
Touyou: Not really.
Misao: That sure was fast, you’re looking like a cool dude.
(but you’re eyes look like death)
Girl: Um…Touyou-senpai, is everything all right?
Misao: Ah look! One of your groupies popped up!
Popular guys sure have it tough, huh?!
Touyou small text: Who says “groupie” these days? Just say “fan”!
Girl: I’m sorry I don’t want to be a bother, but I made you some cake.
Friends: Good luck! Ayaka Fight (do your best)

Page 9:
Misao: Compared to others Touyou dislikes handmade food.
Misao: maybe this will help his confidence recover.
Background Misao: How pathetic…he’s taking the food.(?)
Touyou: Thanks…
Touyou: Delicious
Above the girl’s head: really?
Misao: WHAAAAT? At this place he’s eating… But you absolutely dislike handmade food?!
Girls: Ah That’s great/ that was good Ayaka!
Touyou: Well, that went well.
I did well, didn’t I?
Misao side text: no not really
Girls: You know, Touyou-senpai might have the looks, but…
Girls: He doesn’t really seem like he's cut out to be the boyfriend type
Girls’ small text: There’s no way that could be true though.
Girl: Ahh~ I’ll always remember this moment.
:darn It sounds a bit akward in a few places but I usually go over them after I'm done translating and make corrections.
 

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Oh, you didn't translate those lines? ^^; Well, that's fine too. Hmm. I guess my translation of those lines is close enough to the Japanese and it seems to make sense in the context. I'll just leave it at that, aha.

Good luck with the rest of the translation. :)
 
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