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[nat]

A new picture, Sasusaku this time ...

Link : Suicidal love

 

[- aMt -]

good fanart

 

[Jaime F.]

Uh oh suicidal love. I'm not sure what exactly is happening in your fan art, but it's very well drawn, and you did a decent job coloring it. It's cool that you're able to come up with your own fan art concepts, and color them. Some people are only capable of 1 or the other, so you're lucky you can do both. Someone once told me something similar about being able to play guitar, and compose my own songs, so I thought I'd say the same to you. He was a guitar player, and he could play super fast (a lot faster than me), but he couldn't compose a thing. Well, thanks for sharing your new, creation with us E-nat. Your fan arts never fail to amuse me, so I'm definitely looking forward to seeing more.

 

[Giilshark]

FanArt very good, I just thought you could use more vibrant colors ... Because the rest is very good!

 

[nat]

Thanks for the comments! She supposed to fold the page and as 2D characters can't live outside of their designated panels, when you turn the page they die....especially in the last page where it says 'the end' like a fictional vs reality thing.

@giil, thanks a lot for the critic! I usually have trouble with finding bright enough colors, I will try it next time.
If you have any advice...

 

[nat]

Edit: Changed the contrast to make the colors stronger, hopefully they are more vibrant

 

[Jaime F.]

Hi E-nat, since I commented twice before this, I deleted my previous message to make an updated more current comment. Anyways, your fan art looks awesome now, and the overall quality of your fan art has just increased. Editing this was great idea, and I'm actually really impressed with the your coloring this time around. In my opinion, you did an excellent job. I almost wish that I hadn't rated your coloring so early, because I think you deserve a better rating now. Well, keep up the good work E-nat, and I hope all your future creations turn out just as good as this one.