*UPDATED!!*Ashura Pain!!-{Googlez_kun}-

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Re: Ashura Pain!!-{Googlez_kun}-

He Googlez kun,

I like the lighting on Asura pians body, I think it is done really well. And I also like the mist/dust effect :)

But I do think that overall the colourization needs more contrast, so a bigger difference between dark colours and light ones. And what might also help is a background that is darker than the character.

One more thing, I think the clouds could be even cooler if you added a touch of another colour (i.e. grey or light blue). Because when you only ahve white you can't see any depth. :)

Keep it up.
 

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Re: Ashura Pain!!-{Googlez_kun}-

cool
 

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Re: Ashura Pain!!-{Googlez_kun}-

Looks good.
 

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Re: Ashura Pain!!-{Googlez_kun}-

I like how you colored the Ashura Pain, but imho you put it into a wrong background ^^
 

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Re: Ashura Pain!!-{Googlez_kun}-

He Googlez kun,

I like the lighting on Asura pians body, I think it is done really well. And I also like the mist/dust effect :)

But I do think that overall the colourization needs more contrast, so a bigger difference between dark colours and light ones. And what might also help is a background that is darker than the character.

One more thing, I think the clouds could be even cooler if you added a touch of another colour (i.e. grey or light blue). Because when you only ahve white you can't see any depth. :)

Keep it up.
i see...well thank you for the tips!!:)
i'll try to change something when i have the time to.
thanks aMt!:)
Looks good.
thank you!:D
I like how you colored the Ashura Pain, but imho you put it into a wrong background ^^
thank you VASSiLi!i'm allready working on another bg(hope it suits better):amuse
 

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Re: Ashura Pain!!-{Googlez_kun}-

Cool! I like it :luv

As for the suggestions, you could play with textures for the background as to ,make the picture more harmonious.
the body shading and clothes are very cool, though his metal tail thingy looks off, maybe a different direction of shading and lighting might make it better.


But all in all great job, googlez!



Ps:" Kiriku Mi !!" :rofl....I love you links' names...they're cool :D
 

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Re: Ashura Pain!!-{Googlez_kun}-

Good job!!!:amuse
 

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Re: Ashura Pain!!-{Googlez_kun}-

Cool! I like it :luv

As for the suggestions, you could play with textures for the background as to ,make the picture more harmonious.
the body shading and clothes are very cool, though his metal tail thingy looks off, maybe a different direction of shading and lighting might make it better.


But all in all great job, googlez!



Ps:" Kiriku Mi !!" :rofl....I love you links' names...they're cool :D
i made a different version now,hope you like it(edited it in the first post)!:smile-big
thanks a lot nat!!always appreciate your comments!:)

ps:hehe thanks again:D
Good job!!!:amuse
oh thank you very much!:)
 

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Re: Ashura Pain!!-{Googlez_kun}-

Much better now, the colors look smoother and the awkward back colors are more fitting now...Love the texture, googlez.
Looks like a sand storm :D and the birdies are kewl !

You should put in the title a hint that there is an update otherwise people won't notice ;)
 

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Re: Ashura Pain!!-{Googlez_kun}-

Much better now, the colors look smoother and the awkward back colors are more fitting now...Love the texture, googlez.
Looks like a sand storm :D and the birdies are kewl !

You should put in the title a hint that there is an update otherwise people won't notice ;)
i'm glad it went out how i wanted it!thanks again!:D

oh your right,i'll change it
 
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I had not seen before, but undoubtedly I like more the second version :D is awesome
the texture and the colors are more harmonics
I like how you did the shadows on the Ashura Pain
well, dude I keep looking your improvement and keep up the good job :D (5*for the second)
 

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I had not seen before, but undoubtedly I like more the second version :D is awesome
the texture and the colors are more harmonics
I like how you did the shadows on the Ashura Pain
well, dude I keep looking your improvement and keep up the good job :D (5*for the second)
the first one was kinda....not good:sweatdrop
but i changed it and finally i like it
glad you like it,too:)

thanks for your comment and the 5* :smile-big


btw. does someone know where i can find the lineart of this page?:http://www.onemanga.com/Naruto/245/08/
 
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