What ya think?

[Jameo]

This is my first clean^^
what do you think about it?



edit:
Here is a update^^

 

[zidane]

How long have you worked on it?
I'd say it's slightly overleveled, but that's nothing special,
you'll get better if you practise more ...
Well, tha blacks are black, the whites are mostly white -> pro
But you lost details in the process...

Did you clean the 1200px RAW, or was the raw you've cleaned bigger?

 

[Jameo]

Here is a update^^







so what ya think now!!
give me your Opinion!
especially Manga Editors!!

 

[nxlouco]

I'd Say They're Still A Bit Over leveled, Some Borders Where You Forgot To Erase Connection(Page 02,03), And Something Wrong With Typesetting 0.o Dunno If its font though.....

Wait For Zidane21ps, I'd Say His Explanations Are Way Better Than Mine

 

[THE KING]

I'm not a Manga Editor, but from a viewer's point of view, the first thing I noticed is that some lines and fonts are not anti-alialised and that makes it look ugly, no matter how well u cleaned it.

Well the raws are good, and I don't see what u've done to them other than leveling(which is over leveled like the others said)

Hope u don't find this comment rude

 

[zidane]

I like that third page most...
It's just slightly overleveled, but you could correct that easily, since only the sfx's are noticibly infected...just replace the grays in them...

though you haven't completely blackened the blacks on this one....there's still a lot visible dust left...

anyway, answer my question nao!
how long does it takes you to clean one page, and - tell me something about your methods...
also, have you just resized the raw for this thread, or have you used such a small one?

...think i asked that once already...

anyway, try to level less, and everything will be fine
and practise more...when i practise(d), i do(did) like a whole chapter...not just 3 pages in 2 weeks...

Edit: Why's the ts'ing on that 1st page remind me so fucking much about ours(binktopia's)?
lol, anyway...choose Anti-Alias-Smooth for text...not "none"...