Wich is better for a story?

Snowyplace

Registered User
初心者/ Shoshinsha / Beginner
Joined
Mar 1, 2010
Messages
6
Reaction score
5
Gender
Female
Country
Dominican Republic
Hi ^^ im new to the forum,well kind of i've been around this site for a long time and decided to make and account.

first of,my english sucks xDD,now moving on to my question:

i have a story,like a prologue,main plot and even the ending,cause i plan to make a one-shot manga(if i can call it like that,i think is going to have four long chapters or so.and it will be black and white.) the thing is i allways loved animals,mithology and such,im a fan of a lot of hayao miyasaki's work so it gets in to my art xD and so the characters are anthro(anthropomorphic animals) my brother says it will not work because of that but i think that its ok as long as a story is good it dosen't matter if your characters are rocks!:p theres a lot of comics without humans and they are great ^w^.


what do you think? should i change the characters? or leave it like that and go ahead?

Oh,here are some concepts i made for the different characters.

http://i859.photobucket.com/albums/ab155/SnowyPlace/KaelMikky.png?t=1267486250
The main character and mounting beast(best friend :3)

Other characters:
http://i859.photobucket.com/albums/ab155/SnowyPlace/escanear0016.jpg?t=1267486391

http://i859.photobucket.com/albums/ab155/SnowyPlace/escanear0017.jpg?t=1267486547

http://i859.photobucket.com/albums/ab155/SnowyPlace/escanear0019.jpg?t=1267486619

there's more but my lazyness stops me from putting more lOl. Thanks for your advice and sorry for my english,im more into spanish xd.

 

Agrias

Holy Knight
有名人 / Yuumeijin / Celebrity
Joined
Mar 28, 2007
Messages
4,236
Reaction score
1,260
Age
42
Gender
Female
Country
Brazil
Of course you shouldn't give up because your characters are anthro, no way o_O

Your concept art is pretty good, and there's a anthro scene out there, many fans and all. And of course, as long as your story and characters are strong, there's no way it'll be bad! Keep it up!
 

GEshode

Intl Translator
上級員 / Jyoukuuin / Sr. Member
Joined
Jul 22, 2009
Messages
260
Reaction score
61
Gender
Male
Country
Germany
Nice designs! You can definitely make a story out of it. But some questions I already have are: Why does the mounting beast allow the main character to ride it? They are friends, but is that reason enough? Are both of them equal?
Definitely things I would like to get answered, when reading the story to the characters. Would be really interested to see it happening.
 

Googlez_kun

MH's Best Artist
九千以上だ! / Kyuusen Ijou Da! / It's Over 9000!
Joined
Oct 22, 2008
Messages
9,744
Reaction score
8,510
Gender
Male
Country
Germany
I would like to see how you draw real people,because i always hated animal-like characters.It's really a shame because you seem to be really good at drawing,that's why i'm curious about how you draw real people.^^

Anyway,as long as the story is good the characters shouldn't be too big a problem.
So do you have a plot allready?Or a general idea of what you want to do?
 

Snowyplace

Registered User
初心者/ Shoshinsha / Beginner
Joined
Mar 1, 2010
Messages
6
Reaction score
5
Gender
Female
Country
Dominican Republic
oh im not that bad at drawing humans, i just like to draw animals more than people.

here are some sketches i did today:

http://i48.tinypic.com/21ka6vr.png

*yes,that IS plue xD space filling.

i have a complete plot,just filling some "why and when" to make shure i have a good story.
 

NiKaNoRoU

Registered User
初心者/ Shoshinsha / Beginner
Joined
Feb 13, 2009
Messages
8
Reaction score
0
Age
34
Gender
Male
Country
Greece
These are pretty good. Don't give up. You might want to use a style similar to TwoKinds, if you've heard of it.

I'm looking forward to seeing more from you!
 
Top