Wistful Night

[Sunshine]

Hi all

Here's my first "real" fanart, took me some time, but I'm not really satisfied...so tell me what's wrong, what's nice!!

I drew everything except the tree cause I found some brush set with great trees, and birds which are from naruto. Maybe the background needs something else, but I'm not able to say what. Maube the lineart could be more thin too.

If you have any idea of how i can improve it, feel free

 

[Gaara_dono]

Lovely one dear wife <33.... Loved it!!... but It's not your fault for a... Not that good lineart ^^" .... Loved your shading technique... The only buts are about the bridge (or what it looks like... Try to perfect it more huh! And a little too red for my taste xD) The other one is that the background looks too blurry... Try to do best...
Can't believe it's your first fanart ^^... Keep it up!
They'll say I'm not fair... But... a good husband must reward his wife... Get your five stars ^^
Husband Wife = Gaara Sunshine ^^

 

[lordHokage]

Its not that bad, keep it up.

 

[Sunshine]

Thanks Lord Hokage and thanks my dear but I don't really think i deserve 5 starries for this!

and well...the lineart is all my fault, I did it alone...but it's too strong, that's true. Else, hmm...i'm gonna see what I can do to improve it...i'll edit when done. Thanks for your comments dearest husband